The Thesis Statement
A well-written persuasive essay revolves around a clearly developed thesis. A thesis is an idea, opinion
or conclusion about a subject*. The thesis statement is the thesis expressed in a simple or complex
sentence and is generally found at the end of the introductory paragraph(s). The purpose of the thesis
(and the thesis statement) is to limit the subject of the paper to what the writer knows or can learn
through research for the composition and to the scope and length of the assigned essay.
The 7 Characteristics of a Strong Thesis Statement
1. A strong thesis statement is best expressed in a complete sentence (though never in
question form).
2. A strong thesis statement is clear.
3. A strong thesis statement focuses on a specific, narrow aspect of the topic.
4. A strong thesis statement is not an obvious opinion that the reader already shares.
5. A strong thesis statement can be defended by reason rather than by emotion.
6. A strong thesis statement sets forth the writer’s point of view.
7. A strong thesis statement sets the pattern for the paper to follow by indicating the
supporting topics that will be developed in the body of the paper.
Examples of poor thesis statements (and the characteristics most obviously violated):
Is Beowulf an epic hero? (1, 6, 7)
Beowulf is an epic hero. (6, 7)
Beowulf is an epic hero because he is in an epic. (4, 6, 7)
Beowulf is an epic hero because he is better than Superman. (5, 7)
Beowulf is the quintessential epic hero. (7)
Example of a strong thesis statement:
Though he possesses superhuman strength and is larger than life, Beowulf is the
quintessential epic hero because he clearly embodies the values of his society and his fate is
uniquely intertwined with the fate of his people.
*LIFE CHANGING WRITING TIP: Because the thesis is an opinion, the writer cannot prove the thesis;
therefore, the writer should not attempt the impossible. Instead, set the arguments, or reasons, that
will support the thesis (in the thesis statement) and then prove the reasons/arguments. Properly
document your scholarly and authoritative sources and you are on your way to an effective paper.
The Thesis Statement