Course Overview (ESL) - Esperanza Academy Charter School

Esperanza Academy
Course Overviews 9-12
English Language Arts
Course
High School Literacy
Latino and African-American Literature
Genre Studies
U.S. Literature
British Literature
ELA 9-12 Course Overviews
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High School Literacy
Course Overview
Course Description:
High School Literacy is a reading intensive course designed to raise student reading abilities to the high school level. The course is
divided into a two semesters, with the hope that most students will be able to enter into the regular ELA curriculum after completing
one semester of the course. While the brunt of the course is on reading, using the “Seven Habits of a Good Reader,” the course also
infuses writing skills, introducing students to the main writing standards of reflection, persuasion, response to literature, and narrative
account. This course is also designed with the expectation that the students will be able to produce a five paragraph essay on a given
topic by the end of the course. High School Literacy also has a grammar component that enforces basic rules of parts of speech and
sentence structure to help students develop their writing skills.
Major Texts in suggested order:
• Parrot in the Oven by Victor Martinez
• Novio Boy by Gary Soto
• To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee
• Feed by M.T. Anderson
• Into the Wild by Jon Krakauer
• House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros
Supplemental Materials:
• Author biographies
• Gary Soto Short Stories
• Various sets of books (used for literature circles)
• To Kill a Mockingbird movie
• Crooklyn (movie, to be used with House on Mango Street)
• Teacher and Student Guides for House on Mango Street and To Kill a Mockingbird
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Into the Wild movie
Major Assessments:
• 4 major exams throughout the semester, each including:
• a reading assessment of an unseen text;
• reading assessment based on prior class reading;
• grammar assessment based on lessons taught;
• an essay judged on taught writing standard element
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Into The Wild Writing assignments:
• Literary letter (Session 3, page 27 of curriculum binder)
• Timeline Activity (create timeline of the plot in groups)
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Feed Writing assignments
• Persuasive/Response to Literature Essay on one of the following topics:
- What is the “feed” in society today and how can it be resisted?
- Discuss the negative effects technology can have on society. How can this be remedied?
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To Kill a Mockingbird Writing assignments
• Compare/Contrast between film and novel (to be completed at the end of the novel).
• Reflection Essay: Discuss a time when the student had to take a side in a difficult issue.
Novio Boy Writing assignments:
• Play Writing (can be done in pairs or groups; teach students proper use of scene directions and playwriting devices;
ongoing project to be done while reading the play. Students should identify theme, setting, character descriptions, and
plot line.)
• Advice Paper: Write advice to a character in the play. (Can be done in the beginning of the reading)
Parrot in the Oven Writing assignment:
• Reflective essay: how does social class play a role in the book?
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House on Mango Street Writing assignments:
• Name Analysis :In Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare says, "What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other
word would smell as sweet." What is truly in a name? This essay has four parts, and should be written after reading “My
Name” chapter.
1. What does the line from Shakespeare mean?
2. What is the meaning of your name?
3. Does your name define you, or would you still be the person you are with any other name?
4. If you could choose another name for yourself, what would it be, and why?
• Memoir Project (Final Project after reading novel)
Performance Standards Addressed:
• E1a: Reads 25 Books
• Students work on this standard by reading 6 texts in the class over the year and 4 selected outside reading books.
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E1b: Reading Comprehension within Genres
• Students work on mastery of this standard during the semester by:
• Making and supporting warranted and responsible assertions about the text;
• Supporting assertions with elaborated and convincing evidence;
• Drawing the texts together to compare and contrast themes, characters, and ideas;
• Making well-developed connections
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E2b: Response to Literature Essay Writing
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Advances a judgment
• Supports judgment with references to the text(s)
• Demonstrates understanding of the literature in study
• Anticipates and answers a reader’s questions
• Recognizes possible ambiguities in literature
• Provides a sense of closure
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E2c: Narrative Account
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Establishes a situation, plot, point of view, setting and conflict
• Creates an organizing structure
• Includes sensory details and concrete language
• Excludes extraneous details
• Develops complex characters
• Uses a range of appropriate strategies such as dialogue, tension or suspense, naming, pacing, and specific narrative
action
• Provides a sense of closure
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E2e Persuasive Essay
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Develops a controlling idea and makes a clear judgment
• Creates an appropriate organizing structure
• Includes appropriate information and arguments
• Excludes information and arguments that are irrelevant
• Anticipates and addresses reader concerns and counter-arguments
• Supports arguments with detailed evidence, citing sources of information as appropriate
• Uses a range of strategies to elaborate and persuade, such as definitions, illustrations, examples from evidence, and
anecdotes
• Provides a sense of closure
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E2f Reflective Essay
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Analyzes a condition or situation of significance
• Develops a commonplace, concrete occasion as the basis for the reflection
• Creates an appropriate organizing structure
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Uses a variety of writing strategies, such as concrete details, comparing and contrasting, naming, describing, and
creating a scenario
Provides a sense of closure
E4a: Use of Grammar in Writing
• Demonstrates an understanding of the rules of the English language
• Demonstrates control of:
• Grammar
• Paragraph structure
• Punctuation
• Sentence construction
• Spelling
• Usage
E4b: Revises Written Work
• Adds or deletes details
• Adds or deletes explanations
• Clarifies difficult passages
• Rearranges words, sentences, and paragraphs to improve clarity
• Sharpens the focus
• Reconsiders organizational structure
• Rethinks and/or rewrites the piece in light of different audiences and purposes
PA Standards Addressed:
• 1.1.11 C Use knowledge of root words and words from literary works to recognize and understand the meaning of new words
during reading.
• 1.1.11 D Identify, describe, evaluate, and synthesize the essential ideas in text.
• 1.1.11 E Establish a reading vocabulary by identifying and correctly using new words acquired through the study of their
relationships to other words. Use a dictionary or related reference.
• 1.1.11 G Demonstrate after reading understanding and interpretation of both fiction and nonfiction text
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1.1.11 H Demonstrates fluency and comprehension in reading.
1.2.11 C Produce work in at least one literary genre that follows the conventions of that genre.
1.3.11A Reads and understands works of literature.
1.3.11B Analyzes the relationships, uses and effectiveness of literary elements used by one or more authors in similar genres
including characterization, setting, plot, theme, point of view, tone and style.
1.3.11C Analyze the effectiveness, in terms of literary quality, of the author’s use of literary devices
1.3.11 E Analyze how a scriptwriter’s use of words creates tone and mood, and how choice of words advances the theme or
purpose of the work.
1.4.11 A Write short stories and plays.
1.4.11 C Write persuasive pieces
1.5.11A Writes with a sharp, distinct focus
1.5.11B Writes using well-developed content appropriate for the topic.
1.5.11C Writes with controlled organization
1.5.11D Writes with a command of the stylistic aspects of composition.
1.5.11E Revises writing to improve style, word choice, sentence variety and subtlety of meaning after rethinking how
questions of purpose, audience and genre have been addressed.
1.5.11F Edits writing using the conventions of language.
1.6.11 A Listen to others
1.6.11 B Listen to selections of literature.
1.6.11 C Speak using skills appropriate to formal speech situations
1.6.11D Contributes to discussions.
1.6.11E Participates in small and large group discussions and presentations.
Resource List : (non-text books, magazines, websites)
Gary Soto Websites:
• Biographical information: http://www.garysoto.com/
• Many links to information about Soto: http://falcon.jmu.edu/~ramseyil/soto.htm
• Lesson plans for Soto short stories: http://www.sdcoe.k12.ca.us/score/soto/sototg.html
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Novel Guide for Taking Sides: http://www.classzone.com/novelguides/litcons/taking/guide.cfm
House on Mango Street Websites:
• Great source for links to study guides and resources: http://www.masconomet.org/teachers/trevenen/mango.html
• Detailed unit plan: http://www.glc.k12.ga.us/seqlps/sudspres.asp?SUID=213&SSUID=200&SSTitle=American+Literature+
• Lesson ideas: http://teachers.henrico.k12.va.us/Specialist/franceslively/unitplans/mangostreet10.htm
General Websites:
• Good general literacy links: http://www.readwritethink.org
• Very valuable website on many different topics: http://www.milforded.org/teachers_rooms/highschool/english.asp
• Good general resources on teaching literature: http://www.learner.org/channel/libraries/makingmeaning/
• MLA citing: http://www.mla.org/
• Lessons on a multitude of topics, literature and grammar related: http://www.lessonplanspage.com/LAJH.htm
• Lesson plan links: http://www.eduhound.com/lessonplan_links.cfm
• Links for teachers: http://mciu.org/~spjvweb/tealinks.html
• Good site for various topics, especially reading comprehension: http://www.internet4classrooms.com/skills_7th_lang.htm
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Unit of Study
Parrot in the Oven Unit
6 weeks
Novio Boy Unit (read at
home along with Parrot
in the Oven)
Major Concepts Covered
Skills Mastered
Student Products
-Response to literature/
Reflection
-Reading response
journals
-The 7 Habits of a Good
Reader
-Reading comprehension
strategies
-5 paragraph essay
-Order of events within a
story
-The six elements of
drama.
-Understanding dialogue
and stage directions.
-Plot diagram/
development
-Demonstration of
improved fluency in
reading and reading
comprehension.
-construct basic
paragraphs for a 3
paragraph essay
-Writing in play
format (dialogue/stage
directions)
-Demonstration of
improved fluency in
reading and reading
comprehension.
-Elements of literature,
esp. symbolism and theme
-Racism in society
-7 Habits
Compare/contrast
-Compare/contrast
essay
between the film and
Outlining an argument book.
-Reading response
journals
-Literature Circles
-Graphic organizers
-Value of language
-Abuse of technology
-propaganda
-7 Habits
-Active reading
-Response to reading
-Persuasive essay
-Literature Circles
-Graphic organizers
-reading comprehension
packets
-Advice Paper
-Play Writing project
(final project of first
semester)
-Reading response
journals
6 weeks
To Kill a Mockingbird
Unit
6 weeks
Feed
Effective Teaching
Strategies
-Literature Circles
-Graphic organizers
-chapter summary sheet
6 weeks
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-Persuasive response
essay
- Reading response
journals
-Reading response
journals
-Student read aloud (act
out final scene)
-Character, setting, and
plot development before
beginning play project.
-Literature Circles
-Act out final project
-Graphic organizers
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Into the Wild Unit
-The 7 Habits of a Good
Reader
-Reading comprehension
strategies
-5 paragraph essay
-Order of events within a
story
-Demonstration of
improved fluency in
reading and reading
comprehension.
-Construct a letter
using the point of
view of a character in
the book
-Literary letter (response
to literature where
students put themselves
in the place of one of the
characters)
-Timeline project
-Reading response
journals
-7 Habits
-Characterization
-Poetic prose
-Close reading for
symbolism and theme
-Analysis of literary
elements
-Name analysis project
-Memoir project (final
project)
-Reading response
journals
6 weeks
The House on Mango
Street Unit
6 weeks
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-Student read aloud
-Skeleton model for
five- paragraph essay.
-Completed model fiveparagraph essay.
-Reading comprehension
packets
-Literature Circles
-Graphic organizers
-movie clips for some
chapters
-Literature Circles
-Graphic organizers
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Literary Letter Rubric
Substandard
Little Attempt Made (0-1)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Contains all
seven criteria
Very little of the
criteria are present
All seven criteria are
included
All seven criteria are
included, and work is
outstanding
Plot Summary
(letter criteria
#6
Prediction
(letter criteria
#7)
Does not include a plot
summary
Only some of the
criteria is present,
and/or errors in letter
format
Includes a basic plot
summary with limited
effort
Prediction is included,
but is weak and underdeveloped
Plot summary is
detailed and accurate
Sentence
Structure
Does not write in
complete sentences
Contains some errors
in sentence structure
Writes in complete
sentences
Grammar
(E4a)
More than 6 major
grammar errors
3-5 major grammar
errors
1-2 major grammar
errors
Plot summary is
extremely detailed
and well-developed
Prediction shows
high level of
comprehension and
thought
Sentences are
complete and welldeveloped.
No errors
Does not include a
prediction
Total Points Earned: ________/25
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Prediction is detailed
and plausible
Comments
x4 = _________100 Percentage: ______________ Letter Grade: ______________
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Persuasive/Response to Literature Essay Rubric
Standard
No attempt made (0-1)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Opening sentence has some
engaging qualities, but does
not provide the reader with a
clear idea of the topic.
A topic and argument are
chosen, but are not developed
with enough detail
Opening sentence is engaging
and provides the reader with a
clear idea of the topic
Opening sentence is very
engaging and provides a
very clear idea of the topic.
A topic and an argument are
chosen and are developed
A topic and an argument are
chosen, and are very clear,
well-supported, and highly
developed
Uses very weak references to
the text for support.
Uses some references to the
text for support, but still lacks
enough development
Uses an adequate amount of
references to the text as
evidence to support argument
Uses a large amount of
references to the text and
uses them to solidly support
the argument
Includes a lot of irrelevant
information
Includes some irrelevant
information
Includes very little irrelevant
information
Includes no irrelevant
information
Does not take into account any
intended audience in writing
Takes into account the
intended audience, but still
possesses some unclear ideas.
Takes into account the
intended audience in a way
that makes writing clear and to
the point.
Takes into account the
intended audience in way
that the writing’s clarity is
flawless.
Closing paragraph introduces
new ideas and/or does not
restate the thesis; closing does
not have a “clincher” last
sentence.
Essay has more than 7
mechanics errors
Closing paragraph does not
restate the main points of the
essay enough; closing has
somewhat of a “clincher” last
sentence.
Essay has 4-6 mechanics
errors.
Closing paragraph restates the
main points of the essay and
has a “clincher” last sentence.
Closing sums up all main
points very neatly and ends
with a HUGE BANG!!
Essay has 2-3 mechanics
errors.
Essay has NO mechanical
errors.
Engaging opening
(E2b substandard
1)
Opening sentence does not
introduce the topic and does
not engage the reader
Chooses a topic
and a solid
argument
(E2b substandard
2 and E2e,
substandard 2)
Uses references to
the text to support
argument
(E2b substandard
3 and E2e,
substandard 4))
Excludes
information that is
irrelevant (E2e,
substandard 5)
Writes with an
intended audience
in mind (E2b,
substandard 5 and
6; E2e,
substandard 6)
Provides a sense of
closure
(E2b substandard
7)
A clear topic is not chosen,
nor a strong argument made.
Mechanics (E4a)
Total: ___________/35
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x4= _______________/140
Percentage: _____________%
COMMENTS
Letter Grade: _______________
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Film and Novel Compare/Contrast Essay
Substandard
Engages the
reader
(E2b
substandard 1)
Develops a
clear thesis
(E2b,
substandard 2)
Organizing
structure
(PA 1.1.11C)
Little Attempt Made (0-1)
Makes little attempt to include
an engaging first sentence
Needs Remediation (2-3)
First sentence is engaging,
but does not relate well to
the overall theme of the
paper
An opinion is almost
evident, but is not fully
supported
Meets Standard (4)
First sentence is
engaging and
introduces the overall
theme of the paper
Opinion is clear and
supported
Exceeds (5)
First sentence is
extremely engaging and
introduces the topic
smoothly
Opinion is very clear and
supported extensively
Has very weak paragraph
structure, if any
Has some sense of a
structure, but does not
have clear paragraphs
Has clear paragraphs,
including an intro,
body, and conclusion
References to
the text (and
movie)
(E2b,
substandard 3)
Comparison/
contrast
(E1b,
substandard 3)
Very weak references to the
text are made
There are some
weaknesses in references
to the text
References to the text
support thesis
Little effort is made to
compare and contrast the two
texts
Comparison is evident, but
not fully developed into
three separate comparing
points
Comparison is clearly
divided into three
main comparison
points
Sense of closure
(E2b,
substandard 7)
Closing paragraph introduces
new ideas and/or does not
restate the main idea of the
introduction; closing does not
have a clincher.
More than 6 major grammar
errors
Closing paragraph does
not restate the main points
of the essay enough;
closing could have more
of a clincher ending.
3-5 major grammar errors
Closing paragraph
restates the main
points of the essay and
has a clincher last
sentence.
1-2 major grammar
errors
Paragraph structure is
perfect with special
attention to transitions
between paragraphs
References to the text
support the opinion and
go above and beyond the
expectations of the
assignment.
Comparison is very welldeveloped and goes above
and beyond the
expectations of the
assignment.
Closure has a great
“BANG”
Grammar
(E4a)
No clear opinion is evident
Total Points Earned: ________/35
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x4 = ____________140
Grade and Comments
No errors
Percentage: _________________
Letter Grade: ______________
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Play Writing Rubric
Substandard
Establishes a
situation, plot,
POV, setting,
and conflict
(E2c,
substandard 2)
Organizing
structure (E2c,
substandard 3q)
No Attempt Made (0-1)
Does not include enough
elements to establish a
clear plot
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Makes an attempt to
include some of the
necessary elements, but
not all
Meets Standard (4)
Establishes a situation,
plot, point of view,
setting, and conflict
Exceeds Standard (5)
Goes into great detail
in establishing a
situation, plot, point of
view, and conflict
Play contains very little,
if any overall
organization
Play has some sense of
structure, but lacks an
overall sense of flow
Uses
playwriting
devices (scene
directions,
dialogue, etc.)
Develops
complex
characters
(E2c,
substandard 6)
Sense of
closure (E2f,
substandard 6)
Does not use any
playwriting devices
Uses some playwriting
devices, but not enough
to establish a flow in
reading
Play has an organizing
structure that is
appropriate and is easy to
follow
Uses adequate
playwriting devices to
establish a flow in
reading
Play has a flawless
organizing structure
that allows for ease in
reading
Uses many playwriting
devices that establish a
clear and enjoyable
read
No development of
characters
Characters lack enough
development to make
their part in the story
clear
Develops characters in a
way that makes their part
in the story clear
Features original and
compelling characters
Lacks a sense of closure
Conclusion gives the
story a sense of
completeness
Grammar
More than 6 major
grammar errors
Includes a conclusion,
but one that does not
give the story a sense of
closure
3-5 major grammar
errors
Conclusion leaves the
reader extremely
satisfied and wanting
to read more
No errors
Total Points Earned: ________/30
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x4 = ____________120
1-2 major grammar
errors
Percentage: ______________
Comments
Letter Grade: ______________
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Advice Essay Rubric
Standard
Little attempt made (0-1)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Engaging opening
(E2b substandard
1)
Opening sentence does not
introduce the topic and does
not engage the reader
Makes an
interpretation
(chooses advice)
(E2b substandard
2)
Uses references to
the text to
support thesis
(advice given)
(E2b substandard
3)
Demonstrates
understanding of
the text (E2b,
substandard 4)
Writes with an
intended
audience in mind
(E2b,
substandard 5
and 6)
Provides a sense
of closure
(E2b substandard
7)
Does not give clear advice
Opening sentence has some
engaging qualities, but does
not provide the reader with a
clear idea of the topic.
Advice given shows some
misunderstanding in the text
and/or is not well-developed
Opening sentence is
engaging and provides the
reader with a clear idea of
the topic
Advice given shows a clear
understanding of the text and
is well-developed
Makes very little references
to the text to support advice
given
Makes some references to
the text to support advice
given, but still needs
development
Makes adequate references
to the text to support advice
given
Opening sentence is very
engaging and provides a
very clear idea of the
topic.
Advice given is extremely
well-developed, shows a
high comprehension of the
text, and is very mature in
its insight.
Makes excellent and wellchosen references to the
text to support advice
given
Exhibits very little
understanding of the text.
Some understanding of the
text is evident, but has some
errors in comprehension and
logic.
Takes into account the
intended audience, but still
possesses some unclear
ideas.
Exhibits understanding of
the text.
Exhibits a very high and
mature understanding of
the text.
Takes into account the
intended audience in a way
that makes writing clear and
to the point.
Takes into account the
intended audience in way
that the writing’s clarity is
flawless.
Closing paragraph restates
the main points of the essay
and has a “clincher” last
sentence.
Closing sums up all main
points very neatly and
ends with a HUGE
BANG!!
Essay has 2-3 mechanics
errors.
Essay has NO mechanics
errors.
Mechanics (E4a)
Does not take into account
any intended audience in
writing
Closing paragraph
introduces new ideas and/or
does not restate the thesis;
closing does not have a
“clincher” last sentence.
Essay has more than 7
mechanics errors
Total: ___________/35
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Closing paragraph does not
restate the main points of the
essay enough; closing has
somewhat of a “clincher”
last sentence.
Essay has 4-6 mechanics
errors.
x4= _______________/140
Percentage: _____________%
COMMENTS
Letter Grade: _______________
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Response to Literature Rubric
Standard
Little attempt made (0-1)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Engaging opening
(E2b substandard
1)
Opening sentence does not
introduce the topic and does
not engage the reader
Makes an
interpretation
(has a thesis)
(E2b substandard
2)
Uses references to
the text to
support thesis
(E2b substandard
3)
Demonstrates
understanding of
the text (E2b,
substandard 4)
Writes with an
intended
audience in mind
(E2b,
substandard 5
and 6)
Provides a sense
of closure
(E2b substandard
7)
Interpretation makes very
little effort to show
understanding of the work.
Opening sentence has some
engaging qualities, but does
not provide the reader with a
clear idea of the topic.
Interpretation shows some
failure to understand the
work
Opening sentence is
engaging and provides the
reader with a clear idea of
the topic
Interpretation demonstrates
an understanding of the work
and shows higher level
thinking
Uses very few direct
references to the text
Uses references to the text,
but does not relate them to
the judgment being made.
Uses references to the text
that relate directly to the
judgment being made,
Opening sentence is very
engaging and provides a
very clear idea of the
topic.
Interpretation goes above
and beyond showing
comprehension and makes
mature judgments and
connections.
Uses many references to
the text that are integrated
well into the paper.
Exhibits very little
understanding of the text.
Some understanding of the
text is evident, but has some
errors in comprehension and
logic.
Takes into account the
intended audience, but still
possesses some unclear
ideas.
Exhibits understanding of
the text.
Exhibits a very high and
mature understanding of
the text.
Takes into account the
intended audience in a way
that makes writing clear and
to the point.
Takes into account the
intended audience in way
that the writing’s clarity is
flawless.
Closing paragraph does not
restate the main points of the
essay enough; closing has
somewhat of a “clincher”
last sentence.
Essay has 4-6 mechanics
errors.
Closing paragraph restates
the main points of the essay
and has a “clincher” last
sentence.
Closing sums up all main
points very neatly and
ends with a HUGE
BANG!!
Essay has 2-3 mechanics
errors.
Essay has NO mechanics
errors.
Mechanics (E4a)
Does not take into account
any intended audience in
writing
Closing paragraph
introduces new ideas and/or
does not restate the thesis;
closing does not have a
“clincher” last sentence.
Essay has more than 7
mechanics errors
Total: ___________/35
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x4= _______________/140
Percentage: _____________%
COMMENTS
Letter Grade: _______________
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Reflective Essay Rubric
Substandard
Engages the
reader (E2f,
substandard 1)
Little Attempt Made (0-1)
Makes little attempt to
include an engaging first
sentence
Analyzes a
condition or
situation of
significance
(E2f,
substandard 2)
Organizing
structure (E2f,
substandard 4)
No condition or situation is
chosen
Includes all three
elements of the
assignment
(scenario,
response from
peer, own
response)
Sense of closure
(E2f,
substandard 6)
Grammar (E4a)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
First sentence is engaging,
but does not relate well to
the overall theme of the
paper
Condition or situation is
chosen, but one that lacks
development and details
Meets Standard (4)
First sentence is engaging
and introduces the overall
theme of the paper
Essay lacks any formal
structure
Essay has some structure,
but lacks an overall sense
of flow
Essay has an organizing
structure that is appropriate
for topic and audience
Includes only one element
of the assignment
Includes only 2 elements of
the assignment
Includes all three elements
of the assignment
Closing paragraph
introduces new ideas
and/or does not give a
finished sense to the story
Closing paragraph makes
some attempt to finalize the
story, but still leaves the
reader with s sense of
incompleteness
3-5 major grammar errors
Closing paragraph sums up
the story and leaves the
reader with a sense of
completeness
Closing paragraph ends
the story beautifully and
leaves the reader
extremely satisfied.
1-2 major grammar errors
No errors
More than 6 major
grammar errors
Total Points Earned: ________/30
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Condition or situation is
chosen that can be
developed with details
Exceeds Standard (5)
First sentence is
extremely engaging and
introduces the topic
smoothly
An excellent condition or
situation is chosen that is
well-developed with
details
Comments
Essay has a flawless
organizing structure that
is appropriate for topic
and audience, and goes
beyond expectations in
creating a sense of flow
Includes all three
elements of the
assignment, with special
attention to neatness and
detail
Percentage: _________________
Letter Grade: ______________
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Name Analysis Rubric for House on Mango Street
Substandard
Makes No Attempt
(0-1)
Makes no attempt to
engage the reader in
the first sentence or
introduce the topic
Does not interpret
the Shakespeare
Quote
Little Attempt Made (2)
Needs Remediation (3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Makes little attempt to
include an engaging
first sentence
First sentence is
engaging and introduces
the overall theme of the
paper
Interprets Shakespeare
quote with adequate
development
First sentence is
extremely engaging and
introduces the topic
smoothly
Interprets Shakespeare
quote with a lot of effort
and detail
Analyzes
meaning and
significance of
individual’s
name (E2f,
substandard 2)
Organizing
structure (E2f,
substandard 4)
Does not analyze the
meaning and
significance of their
name
Analyzes the meaning
and significance of
name with very little
effort and detail
First sentence is
engaging, but does not
relate well to the overall
theme of the paper
Interprets Shakespeare
quote to some extent,
but lacks adequate
development
Analyzes the meaning
and significance of name
with some detail, but not
enough development
Analyzes the meaning
and significance of
name with adequate
development and detail
Analyzes the meaning
and significance of
name with great detail
and shows a high level
of effort
Does not have any
formal structure
with paragraphs
Essay lacks any formal
structure
Essay has some
structure, but lacks an
overall sense of flow
Essay has an organizing
structure that is
appropriate for topic
and audience
Sense of closure
(E2f,
substandard 6)
There is no sense of
closure or
conclusion
Closing paragraph
introduces new ideas
and/or does not give a
finished sense to the
story
Closing paragraph sums
up the story and leaves
the reader with a sense
of completeness
Grammar (E4a)
More than 8 major
grammar errors
6-8 major grammar
errors
Closing paragraph
makes some attempt to
finalize the story, but
still leaves the reader
with s sense of
incompleteness
3-5 major grammar
errors
Essay has a flawless
organizing structure that
is appropriate for topic
and audience, and goes
beyond expectations in
creating a sense of flow
Closing paragraph ends
the story beautifully and
leaves the reader
extremely satisfied.
Engages the
reader (E2f,
substandard 1)
Interprets
Shakespeare
quote
Total Points Earned: ________/30
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Interprets Shakespeare
quote weakly, if at all
x4 = ____________120
1-2 major grammar
errors
Percentage: _________________ %
Comments
No errors
Letter Grade: ______________
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Pennsylvania Writing Assessment Holistic Scoring Guide
6
5
4
3
2
1
Focus
sharp, distinct focus
clear focus
adequate focus
Vague focus
confused focus
absence of focus
Content
Substantive, specific
and/ or illustrative
content; sophisticated
ideas that are
particularly well
developed
specific and
illustrative content
sufficient content
content limited to a
listing, repetition or
mere sequence of
ideas
superficial content
absence of relevant
content
inconsistent
organization
confused
organization
absence of
organization
Organization obviously controlled
and/ or subtle
organization
logical and appropriate appropriate
organization
organization
Style
writer’s choice apparent precision and variety
in tone, sentence
in sentence structure
structure and word
and word choice
choice
some precision and
variety in sentence
structure and word
choice
limited sentence
variety and word
choice
Lack of sentence and no apparent control
word choice variety over sentence structure
and word choice
Conventions
few mechanical and
usage errors
mechanical and usage
errors not severe
enough to interfere
significantly with the
writer’s purpose
repeated weaknesses
in mechanics and
usage
mechanical and
usage errors that
seriously interfere
with the writer’s
purpose
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some mechanical and
usage errors
mechanical and usage
error so severe that
writer’s ideas are
difficult, if not
impossible, to
understand
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Nonscorable
Is illegible i.e.; includes so many undecipherable words that
no sense can be made of the response
Focus
Demonstrates an awareness of
audience and task.
Establishes and maintains a
clear purpose.
Sustains single point of view.
Exhibits clarity of ideas.
Content
Information and details are
specific to topic.
Information and details are
relevant to focus.
Ideas are fully developed.
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Is incoherent, i.e.: words are legible but syntax is so
garbled that the report makes no sense
Organization
Logical order of sequence is
maintained.
Paragraphs deal with one
subject.
Logical transitions are made
within sentences between and
paragraphs.
Introduction and conclusion
are evident.
Style
Precise language.
Effective word choice.
Voice, tone originality of
language.
Variety of sentence structures,
types and lengths.
Conventions
Mechanics: spelling,
capitalization, punctuation.
Usage (e.g. pronoun
references, subject-verb
agreement).
Sentence completeness.
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Course Overview Latino and African-American Literature
Course Description:
Latino and African-American Literature is a close study of poetry, short stories, novel excerpts, articles and films that convey the
Latino and African-American experience. The majority of the readings are bound together in a Literature reader divided into four
major themes: roots, history and culture; family; self and identity; and marginalization. In addition to reading, analyzing, and
interpreting the literature of this genre, students will study the historical and cultural events surrounding the time periods of the
material read via group discussions, journal reflections and film analyses. Students will concentrate on mastering their writing skills
using guided writing and outlining techniques for the five paragraph essay in order to master PA performance standards.
Major Texts:
Literature Reader featuring the following short stories and novel excerpts:
Part I: Roots/History/Culture
“Narrative of the Life of an American Slave”
by Frederick Douglass
“Incidents in the Life of a Slave Girl” by
Harriet Jacobs
“My Name” by Sandra Cisneros
“Like Mexicans” by Gary Soto
“Nigger-Reecan Blues, for Piri Thomas” by
Willie Perdomo
from Juneteenth by Ralph Ellison
“The Mulatto” by Victor Sejour
“God Is Beside You on the Picket Line” by
Cesar Chavez
“Amigo Brothers” by Piri Thomas
“Treasures of Time” by Florida Ruffin Ridley
from Bless Me, Ultima by Rudolfo Anaya
from The Autobiography of an Ex-Colored
Man by James Weldon Johnson
“Everyday Use” by Alice Walker
from Up From Slavery by Booker T.
Washington
“The Night Before Christmas” by Tomas
Rivera
“Tales Told Under the Mango Tree” by Judith
Ortiz Cofer
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Part II: Family
“The Hammon and the Beans” by Americo
Paredes
“The Ethics of Living Jim Crow”
Wright
from I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings by
Maya Angelou
“Bitter Sugar: Why Puerto Ricans Leave
Home” by Jesus Colon
“The Jacket” by Gary Soto
from Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
by Richard
from Black Boy by Richard Wright
from When I Was Puerto Rican by Esmeralda
Santiago
“A Day With My Father” by Danzy Senna
“Raymond’s Run” by Toni Cade Bambara
“Eva and Daniel” by Tomas Rivera
“The Tree” by Maria Luisa Bombal
from The Greatest Performance by Elias
Miguel Munoz
from Notes of a Native Son by James Baldwin
“Tell Martha Not to Moan” by Sherley Anne
Williams
from The Autobiography of Malcolm X by
Malcolm X
“Mi Familia” by Carmen Tafolla
“The Konk” by Piri Thomas
from The Women of Brewster Place by Gloria
Naylor
“A Perfect Hotspot” by Virgil Suarez
from The Color Purple by Alice Walker
“The Moths” by Helena Maria Viramontes
from Annie John by Jamaica Kincaid
from Dreaming in Cuban by Cristina Garcia
“Shooting Stars” by Denis Chavez
Part III: Identity/Self
“Why I Like Country Music” by James Alan
McPherson
Part IV: Marginalization
“Beauty: When the Other Dancer is the Self”
by Alice Walker
from Hunger of Memory by Richard Rodriguez
from …And the Earth Did Not Devour Him by
Tomas Rivera
“How It Feels to Be Colored Me” by Zora
Neale Hurston
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“The American Invasion of Macun” (from
When I Was Puerto Rican) by Esmeralda
Santiago
“Summer Tragedy” by Arna Bontemps
“An Awakening…Summer 1956” by Nicholasa
Mohr
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I, Too Sing America by Catherine Clinton (a collection of African-American poetry)
Red Hot Salsa by Lori Marie Carlson (a collection of Latino poetry)
Supplemental Materials:
•
•
•
Author biographies
Articles
Films:

Root, History, Culture
Roots Episode 1

Family
Real Women Have Curves
Imitation of Life (1959 version)
Soul food
Mi Familia

Identity & Self
Bamboozled
Maria Full of Grace
David Chappell’s The Chappell Show (various comedic sketches dealing with race relations within
American Society

Marginalization
The Women of Brewster Place (film version)
Malcolm X
•
Cultural and historical studies of:
• Latino migration to the United States
• Mexico, Puerto Rico, and Cuba
• Mexican Migrant Workers Movement
• Interracial Issues
• Slavery in the U.S.
• Civil Rights Movement in 1960s U.S.
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Major Assessments:
•
4 major exams throughout the year, each including:
• a reading assessment of an unseen text;
• reading assessment based on prior class reading;
• grammar assessment based on lessons taught;
• an essay judged on taught writing standard elements
•
4 Reflective Essays (with attached rubric):
• Students will produce a self-reflection essay on each of the four major themes of the literature reader. (This will be
compiled in portfolio form as one of the final projects of the course.
•
1 major Narrative Account (with attached rubric):
• Students will develop a narrative account of their own modeling the genre of the short story read in class. (This will be
completed in stages throughout the semester and will compiled in portfolio form as one the final projects of the course.)
•
1 major Persuasive Essay (with attached rubric):
• One persuasive essay will be written on an issue discussed in class. (i.e., Puerto Rican independence; slavery
reparations; civil rights; civil quality in the United States, etc.)
• One persuasive essay will be written on an issue of personal concern./interest to the student.
•
1 class debate or Persuasive Speech (with attached rubric):
• Debate: Class will generate a topic of interest for a class-wide debate. Students will argue a position, using elements of
the persuasive writing standard and debate rubric as criteria.
• Persuasive Speech: 3-5 minute speech on any topic of interest discussed in class. Students will argue a position, using
elements of the persuasive writing standard and debate rubric as criteria.
MLA research writing format
• A 2-3 page research assignment on Latino and African American culture and literature using MLA citation and format
•
Performance Standards: (taken from NCEE’s New Standards Performance Standards)
•
E1a: Reads 25 Books
• Students work on this standard by reading 10 books throughout the semester. The equivalent of two books are read with the
course work, three books are chosen from a generated list of genre relevant high school-level books, and five books may be chosen by
the student.
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E1b: Reading Comprehension within Genres
• Students work on mastery of this standard during the semester by:
• Making and supporting warranted and responsible assertions about the text;
• Supporting assertions with elaborated and convincing evidence;
• Drawing the texts together to compare and contrast themes, characters, and ideas;
• Making well-developed connections
•
E2c: Narrative Account
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Establishes a situation, plot, point of view, setting and conflict
• Creates an organizing structure
• Includes sensory details and concrete language
• Excludes extraneous details
• Develops complex characters
• Uses a range of appropriate strategies such as dialogue, tension or suspense, naming, pacing, and specific narrative action
• Provides a sense of closure
•
E2e Persuasive Essay
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Develops a controlling idea and makes a clear judgment
• Creates an appropriate organizing structure
• Includes appropriate information and arguments
• Excludes information and arguments that are irrelevant
• Anticipates and addresses reader concerns and counter-arguments
• Supports arguments with detailed evidence, citing sources of information as appropriate
• Uses a range of strategies to elaborate and persuade, such as definitions, illustrations, examples from evidence, and
anecdotes
• Provides a sense of closure
•
E2f Reflective Essay
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Analyzes a condition or situation of significance
• Develops a commonplace, concrete occasion as the basis for the reflection
• Creates an appropriate organizing structure
• Uses a variety of writing strategies, such as concrete details, comparing and contrasting, naming, describing, and creating a
scenario
• Provides a sense of closure
•
E4a: Use of Grammar in Writing
• Demonstrates an understanding of the rules of the English language
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•
•
Demonstrates control of:
• Grammar
• Paragraph structure
• Punctuation
• Sentence construction
• Spelling
• Usage
E4b: Revises Written Work
• Adds or deletes details;
• Adds or deletes explanations;
• Clarifies difficult passages;
• Rearranges words, sentences, and paragraphs to improve clarity;
• Sharpens the focus
• Reconsiders organizational structure
• Rethinks and/or rewrites the piece in light of different audiences and purposes
Pennsylvania State Standards:
•
1.1.11 C Use knowledge of root words and words from literary works to recognize and understand the meaning of new words
during reading.
• 1.1.11 D Identify, describe, evaluate, and synthesize the essential ideas in text.
• 1.1.11 E Establish a reading vocabulary by identifying and correctly using new words acquired through the study of their
relationships to other words. Use a dictionary or related reference.
• 1.1.11 G Demonstrate after reading understanding and interpretation of both fiction and nonfiction text
• 1.1.11 H Demonstrates fluency and comprehension in reading.
• 1.2.11 C Produce work in at least one literary genre that follows the conventions of that genre.
• 1.3.11A Reads and understands works of literature.
• 1.3.11B Analyzes the relationships, uses and effectiveness of literary elements used by one or more authors in similar genres
including characterization, setting, plot, theme, point of view, tone and style.
• 1.3.11C Analyze the effectiveness, in terms of literary quality, of the author’s use of literary devices
• 1.4.11 A Write short stories
• 1.4.11 C Write persuasive pieces
• 1.5.11A Writes with a sharp, distinct focus
• 1.5.11B Writes using well-developed content appropriate for the topic.
• 1.5.11C Writes with controlled organization
• 1.5.11D Writes with a command of the stylistic aspects of composition.
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•
•
•
•
•
1.5.11E Revises writing to improve style, word choice, sentence variety and subtlety of meaning after rethinking how
questions of purpose, audience and genre have been addressed.
1.5.11F Edits writing using the conventions of language.
1.6.11 A Listen to others
1.6.11 C Speak using skills appropriate to formal speech situations
1.6.11D Contributes to discussions.
1.6.11E Participates in small and large group discussions and presentations
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Grammar Topics:
LAAL grammar will focus and develop student writing skills. Compound and complex sentences, introductory clauses, and
descriptive clauses will be deliberately incorporated into student writing. Students will further develop academic tone and control of
voice in writing.
Lessons will include:
• Types of clauses
• Sentence structure
• Punctuation of complex sentences and dialogue
• Sentence boundaries
• Sentence variety and critical analysis of writing
PSSA Exam Items Addressed:
Through completing this course, students will be preparing themselves for the upcoming PSSA exam by doing the following:
•
•
•
•
•
•
Understanding and interpreting fictional texts
Analyzing the relationships and effectiveness of literary devices
Analyzing main ideas and supporting details of texts in class
Analyzing authors’ mood and tone
Supporting a judgment with evidence from the text
Responding to works of literature (through both formal writing and informal discussion)
SAT Exam Items Addressed:
Through completing this course, students will be preparing themselves for the upcoming SAT exam by doing the following:
•
•
•
Students will learn two new words every day that can be applied in academic conversation about literature
Critical reading done in class will assist students in longer and more detailed reading comprehension section
Literature read (both in class and individually as part of students’ 25 Book Campaign requirement) will help students with
critical reading sections.
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Helpful Websites for Teachers of Latino and African-American Studies:
U.S. Slavery Websites:
• Excellent comprehensive site of events, issues, and slave accounts: http://www.spartacus.schoolnet.co.uk/USAslavery.htm
• Slavery in the United States; A Resource Unit for Teachers Grades 9-12:
http://alumni.cc.gettysburg.edu/~s330558/Mainslaverypage.html
• National Slavery Museum Website: http://usnationalslaverymuseum.org/
Civil Rights Websites:
• An excellent lesson plan discussing the American Dream through the work of MLK:
http://ldt.stanford.edu/2001/projects/mlk/teacher/mlktsite/ihdlesson.htm
Puerto Rican Websites:
• Puerto Rican Culture and Literature: http://welcome.topuertorico.org/culture/litera.shtml
• General article on Puerto Rican literature: http://www.geocities.com/TheTropics/3684/lit.html
• Timeline of Puerto Rican history: http://welcome.topuertorico.org/history.shtml
• Puerto Rican History and Culture: http://www.prboriken.com/culture.htm
• A Forum on Puerto Rico and the American Dream: http://www.prboriken.com/culture.htm
• Tainos of Puerto Rico: http://www.elboricua.com/history.html
• Puerto Rican Independence Party website: http://www.independencia.net/ingles/welcome.html
• Puerto Rico: State, Commonwealth, or Country: http://geography.about.com/library/weekly/aa031698.htm
• Frequently Asked Questions about Puerto Rican Independence: http://www.geocities.com/elgranmoncho2002/engver.html
Cuban Websites:
• History of Cuba-U.S. Relations: Puerto Rican Culture and Literature: http://welcome.topuertorico.org/culture/litera.shtml
• A brief cultural overview of the people of Cuba: http://www.cwo.com/~lucumi/history.htm
• A brief history of Cuba: http://www.lonelyplanet.com/destinations/caribbean/cuba/history.htm
Mexican Websites:
• An extensive site covering ancient to modern Mexican history: http://www.mexconnect.com/mex_/history/historyindex.html
• Mexican History from the History Channel: http://www.historychannel.com/exhibits/mexico/
• Relations with the U.S.: http://countrystudies.us/mexico/93.htm
• Mexican-American Voices: http://www.beyondbooks.com/lam12/3f.asp
General Latino Websites:
• Extensive list of Latino author biographies: Mexican-American Voices: http://www.beyondbooks.com/lam12/3f.asp
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General Websites:
• Good general literacy links: http://www.readwritethink.org
• Very valuable website on many different topics: http://www.milforded.org/teachers_rooms/highschool/english.asp
• Good general resources on teaching literature: http://www.learner.org/channel/libraries/makingmeaning/
• MLA citing: http://www.mla.org/
• Common Proofreading Symbols: http://webster.commnet.edu/writing/symbols.htm
• Lessons on a multitude of topics, literature and grammar related: http://www.lessonplanspage.com/LAJH.htm
• Lesson plan links: http://www.eduhound.com/lessonplan_links.cfm
• Links for teachers: http://mciu.org/~spjvweb/tealinks.html
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Latino and African American Studies Unit Plan
Unit of Study
Major Concepts Covered
Class themes:
Roots
History
&
Culture
- Who vs. What
- The “Other”
- Common Ground
- Name Calling
- The Minority
- American Quilt
vs.
The Melting Pot
4 Week Unit
Analysis & Critical Thinking:
- extracting information from texts
-drawing conclusions based on texts
-supporting conclusions using
factual information from text as
evidence.
Basic Outlining
Student Products
Effective Teaching
Strategies
- Film & Story Analytical
Reponses
- Persuasive Essay (2 pg)
(Hip-Hop Article)
- Several 25 Book
Campaign Summaries
- Journal Submission
- Short Story
- Reflective Essay
- Class Readings
- Class Discussions
- Writing Workshops
- Lectures
- Visual Aids
- Supplemental Materials:
- Author biographies
- Articles
Films
Cultural immersion days
Journals and journal sharing
- Film & Story Analytical
Reponses
- Comparative Essay
(2-3 pg)
- Several 25 Book
Campaign Summaries
- Journal Submission
- Family Tree
- Student Narrative
- Class Readings
- Class Discussions
- Writing Workshops
- Lectures
- Visual Aids
- Supplemental Materials:
- Author biographies
- Articles
- Films
5 Paragraph Essay
Direct quotation from sources
6 Week Unit
Family
Skills Mastered
MLA citations
Class Themes:
- The Absentee Father
- The Single Mom
- Latch Key Children
- Miscegenation & The
Tragic Mulato
- Family Artifacts
- Food as a Means of Togetherness
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- 6 Paragraph Essay
- Using Quotations
- How to Conduct an
Interview
- The Extended Outline
- Note Taking
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Unit of Study
Identity
Major Concepts
Covered
3 Week Unit
Student Products
Effective Teaching
Strategies
Class Themes:
- Influence of
Environment on the
Individual
- The Power of One
- Conformity
- Argumentation &
Debating
- Supporting & proving personal
views
-Citing more than one source
-Bibliography
- Basic Poetic Technique
- Analyzing Poetry
- 2 Reflective Essays
- 2 Extended Outlines
- Class Debate
- Individual position paper based on
debate
- Several 25 Book
Campaign Summaries
- Journal Submission
- Poetic Self Expression Piece
(Performed for Poetry Café)
- Class Readings
- Class Discussions
- Writing Workshops
- Lectures
- Visual Aids
- Supplemental Materials:
- Author biographies
- Articles
- Films
- Poems
Class Themes:
- Making Connections
Between Class
Readings, Class Themes
& Actual American
Society.
- Several 25 Book
Campaign Summaries
- Journal Submission
- Creative Assignment:
- Class Readings
- Class Discussions
- Writing Workshops
- Lectures
- Visual Aids
- Class Trip
- Supplemental Materials:
- Author biographies
- Articles
- Films
- Poems
5 week unit
Marginalization
Skills Mastered
- Affects of Marginalization on
Cultural Groups
- Crime & the Lower
Class
- Education and the
Marginalized
- Who is to Blame?
-Research skills
Student will use a creative
or performing art to
express a theme (s) that we
have covered
- Reflective Essay
(Course Overview)
- Class Survey
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Persuasive Essay Rubric
Substandard
Engages the
reader
No Attempt Made (0-1)
Makes no attempt to
include an engaging first
sentence
Needs Major Revision (2)
First sentence makes some
effort to be engaging, but
does not relate well to the
overall theme of the paper
An opinion is almost
evident, but is not fully
supported
Has little sense of a
structure and weak
paragraph development
Needs Some Revision (3)
First sentence is engaging,
but does not adequately
introduce the topic of the
paper
An opinion is evident, but
not fully supported
Meets Standard (4)
First sentence is engaging
and introduces the overall
theme of the paper
Develops a clear
opinion
No clear opinion is evident
Organizing
structure
No paragraph structure
Has some sense of a
paragraph structure, but
needs more attention to
flow and transitions
Has clear paragraph
structure with attention to
flow and transitions
Reasons/Evidence
No evidence to support
opinion
There are some major
weaknesses in evidence
There are some minor
weaknesses in evidence
Evidence supports the
opinion
Counterarguments
No attempt is made to
consider the counterargument
Very little attempt made in
attacking the arguments of
the other side
Some attempt made at
attacking the arguments of
the opposing side, but still
lacks necessary
development
Considers the arguments of
the opposing side and uses
this consideration to attack
the argument
Sense of closure
Closing paragraph
introduces new ideas
and/or does not restate the
main idea of the
introduction; closing does
not have a clincher.
More than 8 major
grammar errors
Closing paragraph does not
restate the main points of
the essay enough; closing
could have more of a
clincher ending.
Closing sums up most of
the main points of the
essay, but leaves out some
important points that are
left without an end
Closing paragraph restates
the main points of the essay
and has a clincher last
sentence.
6-8 major grammar errors
3-4 major grammar errors
1-2 major grammar errors
Grammar
Total Points Earned: ________/35
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Opinion is clear and
supported
Percentage: _________________
Exceeds Standard (5)
First sentence is
extremely engaging and
introduces the topic
smoothly
Opinion is very clear and
supported extensively
Paragraph structure is
extremely organized
with special attention to
transitions between
paragraphs
Evidence supports the
opinion extensively and
goes above and beyond
the expectations of the
assignment.
Actively considers the
arguments of the
opposing Uses words
like “some say” and
“However” in responding
and attacking arguments
Closure has a great
“BANG” and sums up all
main points of the essay.
No errors
Letter Grade: ______________
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Reflective Essay Rubric
Substandard
Engages the
reader (E2f,
substandard 1)
No Attempt Made (0-1)
Makes little or no attempt
to include an engaging first
sentence+
Needs Remediation (2-3)
First sentence is engaging,
but does not relate well to
the overall theme of the
paper
Condition or situation is
chosen, but one that lacks
development and details
Meets Standard (4)
First sentence is engaging
and introduces the overall
theme of the paper
Analyzes a
condition or
situation of
significance
(E2f,
substandard 2)
Organizing
structure (E2f,
substandard 4)
A weak condition or
situation is chosen
Essay lacks a formal
structure
Essay has some structure,
but lacks an overall sense
of flow
Essay has an organizing
structure that is appropriate
for topic and audience
Uses a variety of
writing strategies
(E2f,
substandard 5)
Includes little or no writing
strategies discussed in class
Makes some attempt at
using writing strategies, but
essay still lacks depth
Uses writing strategies that
make writing interesting
Sense of closure
(E2f,
substandard 6)
Closing paragraph
introduces new ideas
and/or does not give a
finished sense to the story
Closing paragraph sums up
the story and leaves the
reader with a sense of
completeness
Grammar (E4a)
Grammar errors are so
numerous that
comprehension is affected
Closing paragraph makes
some attempt to finalize the
story, but still leaves the
reader with s sense of
incompleteness
3-5 major grammar errors
Essay has a flawless
organizing structure that
is appropriate for topic
and audience, and goes
beyond expectations in
creating a sense of flow
Uses many different
writing strategies that
make essay extremely
interesting and enjoyable
to read
Closing paragraph ends
the story beautifully and
leaves the reader
extremely satisfied.
1-2 major grammar errors
No errors
Total Points Earned: ________/30
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Condition or situation is
chosen that can be
developed with details
Exceeds Standard (5)
First sentence is
extremely engaging and
introduces the topic
smoothly
An excellent condition or
situation is chosen that is
well-developed with
details
Percentage: _________________
Comments
Letter Grade: ______________
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Narrative Account Rubric
Substandard
Engages the reader
(E2c, substandard
1)
Establishes a
situation, plot,
POV, setting, and
conflict (E2c,
substandard 2)
Organizing
structure (E2c,
substandard 3q)
Includes sensory
details and
concrete language
(E2c, substandard
4)
Develops complex
characters (E2c,
substandard 6)
Uses a range of
appropriate
strategies (E2c,
substandard 7)
Sense of closure
(E2f, substandard
6)
Grammar
Needs Major Revision (1-2)
First sentence makes some
effort to introduce the story,
but lacks engagement
Makes a minimal effort to
include one or two of the
elements, but lacks attention
to all
Needs Some Revision (3)
First sentence is engaging,
but does not relate well to the
narrative.
Makes an attempt to include
some of the necessary
elements, but not all
Meets Standard (4)
First sentence is engaging and
introduces the overall theme
of the narrative
Establishes a situation, plot,
point of view, setting, and
conflict
Exceeds Standard (5)
First sentence is extremely
engaging and introduces
the narrative
Goes into great detail in
establishing a situation,
plot, point of view, and
conflict
Story is choppy, has little
attention to flow, and
paragraph structure is
scattered and weak.
Makes a minimal attempt to
include sensory details and
concrete language, but overall
attempt is lacking in effort.
Story has some structure, but
lacks an overall sense of flow
Story has an organizing
structure that is appropriate
for topic and audience
Makes an attempt to use some
sensory details and concrete
language, but story lacks
enough details to keep reader
interest
Characters lack enough
development to make their
part in the story clear
Uses some purposeful writing
strategies, but not enough to
create a lasting effect
Uses enough sensory details
and concrete language to lend
to an interesting story
Story has a flawless
organizing structure that is
appropriate for topic and
audience.
Uses sensory details and
concrete language
throughout the narrative
that lends to a riveting
story
Features original and
compelling characters
Includes a conclusion, but
one story still seems slightly
unfinished
3-5 major grammar errors
Conclusion gives the story a
sense of completeness
Characters are weakly
developed and their part in
the story is very unclear
Uses very few purposeful
strategies, not enough to
make an effect
Conclusion is very weak and
the story seems to lack an
ending.
Grammar errors are so
numerous that comprehension
is affected
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Develops characters in a way
that makes their part in the
story clear
Uses a variety of writing
strategies
1-2 major grammar errors
Comments
Effectively uses writing
strategies to enhance
narrative
Conclusion leaves the
reader extremely satisfied
and wanting to read more
No errors
Percentage: _________________
Letter Grade: ______________
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Debate Rubric
Substandard
No Attempt Made (0-1)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Opening and
Closing Statements
Arguments are unorganized,
incomplete, or completely
lacking in evidence. Opening
statement and closing
statements do little more than
state the position of the team
Somewhat organized
presentation of arguments and
evidence. Opening statement
minimally outlines arguments;
closing argument briefly
restates ideas offered in the
opening statement
Well-organized and complete
presentation of arguments and
evidence. Opening statement
successfully frames the issues;
closing statement summarizes
many arguments made in the
debate.
Rebuttals
Is unable to respond to issues
raised by opponents in a
meaningful or accurate way
Seems to be caught off-guard
by opponents; offers tentative,
somewhat accurate, but
possible vague or illogical
responses.
Responds to issues raised by
opponents with accurate and
generally concise answers.
Challenges the arguments
made by opponents.
Effective use of
evidence/content
knowledge
Demonstrates an inadequate
understanding of the history
content relevant to the topic.
Supports statements with
vague or irrelevant
information, or none at all.
Demonstrates a generally
accurate understanding of
relevant issues, events, and
facts, but exhibits minor
confusion or
misunderstandings.
Demonstrates a basic and
accurate understanding of the
issues, events, and facts
relevant to the topic.
Use of persuasive
appeal
Does not use persuasive
rhetoric.
Makes minimal use of
persuasive rhetoric.
Uses logical, emotional, and
ethical appeals to enhance
effectiveness of argument.
Language Use
Uses colloquial, overly
simplistic language; uses
language and syntax that is
unclear.
Generally uses language that is
appropriate, but unclear at
times.
Uses language that is
appropriate. Uses literary
devices to add interest.
Performance
Demonstrates little or no
preparation. Fails to maintain
respectful tone.
Maintains respectful tone, but
lacks confidence; use of
preparation materials distracts
from quality of performance.
Exhibits confidence and
energy. Maintains respectful
tone. Uses preparation
materials effectively.
Extremely thorough, wellorganized presentation of
arguments and evidence.
Opening statement engages the
interest of audience; closing
statement leaves no unanswered
issues and resonates with the
audience
Responds to issues raised by
opponents with concise,
accurate, logical answers.
Effectively challenges the
arguments made by opponents
and evidence.
Demonstrates a sophisticated
understanding of the issues,
events, and facts relevant to the
topic. Demonstrates thorough
and accurate understanding of
details as well as the ability to
make original connections and
interpretations.
Makes deliberate and effective
use of logical, emotional, and
ethical appeals in order to
persuade.
Uses language that is
stylistically sophisticated and
appropriate; uses literary
devices to enhance the
argument.
Exhibits confidence, energy,
and passion. Maintains
respectful tone. Accesses
preparation materials with ease.
Total Points Earned: ________/30
x5 = ____________120
Percentage: _________________
Comments
Letter Grade: ______________
Pennsylvania Writing Assessment Holistic Scoring Guide
6
Focus
sharp, distinct focus
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clear focus
4
adequate focus
3
Vague focus
2
confused focus
1
absence of focus
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Content
Substantive, specific and/ specific and illustrative
or illustrative content;
content
sophisticated ideas that are
particularly well developed
sufficient content
content limited to a
superficial content
listing, repetition or mere
sequence of ideas
absence of relevant
content
Organization
obviously controlled and/
or subtle organization
appropriate organization
inconsistent organization confused organization
absence of organization
Style
writer’s choice apparent in precision and variety in
tone, sentence structure
sentence structure and
and word choice
word choice
some precision and
variety in sentence
structure and word
choice
limited sentence variety
and word choice
Lack of sentence and
word choice variety
no apparent control over
sentence structure and
word choice
Conventions
few mechanical and usage
errors
mechanical and usage
repeated weaknesses in
errors not severe enough mechanics and usage
to interfere significantly
with the writer’s purpose
mechanical and usage
errors that seriously
interfere with the
writer’s purpose
mechanical and usage
error so severe that
writer’s ideas are
difficult, if not
impossible, to understand
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logical and appropriate
organization
some mechanical and
usage errors
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Nonscorable
Is illegible i.e.; includes so many undecipherable words that no
sense can be made of the response
Focus
Demonstrates an awareness of
audience and task.
Establishes and maintains a clear
purpose.
Sustains single point of view.
Exhibits clarity of ideas.
Content
Information and details are
specific to topic.
Information and details are
relevant to focus.
Ideas are fully developed.
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Is incoherent, i.e.: words are legible but syntax is so garbled
that the report makes no sense
Organization
Logical order of sequence is
maintained.
Paragraphs deal with one subject.
Logical transitions are made
within sentences between and
paragraphs.
Introduction and conclusion are
evident.
Style
Precise language.
Effective word choice.
Voice, tone originality of
language.
Variety of sentence structures,
types and lengths.
Conventions
Mechanics: spelling,
capitalization, punctuation.
Usage (e.g. pronoun references,
subject-verb agreement).
Sentence completeness.
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Course Overview - Genre Studies
Course Description:
Genre Studies is a course designed to develop understanding and analysis of literary genres. Through studying the genres of novel,
drama, and poetry, students will gain an appreciation for the ability of literature to develop and transmit individual voices. Further,
voice will be addressed as a major theme in cultural control and transformation. In their writing, students will learn to critically
analyze voice and related issues, and through the creative writing process, investigate their own voices.
Major Texts:
Novel:
Teacher may choose: Their Eyes Were Watching God by Zora Neale Hurston
The Color Purple by Alice Walker
***Honors: Sorrow’s Kitchen by Mary E. Lyons
Play:
A Midsummer Night’s Dream William Shakespeare
Short Stories
Poetry:
Unit I: “The Lottery”- Shirley Jackson “A Rose for Emily”- William Faulkner
Unit II teacher’s choice of 2-3: “Story of an Hour” –Kate Chopin “A Jury of Her Peers”- Susan Glaspell
Robert Frost – “Mending Wall”; “The Road Not Taken”; “Fire and Ice”; “Acquainted with the Night”; “Dust
of Snow”; “Nothing Gold Can Stay”; “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening”; “The Tuft of Flowers”; “A
Peck of Gold”
Langston Hughes – “Montage of a Dream Deferred”; “Dreams”; “I, Too, Sing America”; “Democracy”; “Let
America be America Again”; “Mother to Son”; “The Blues”; “Night Funeral in Harlem
Poems available at: http://www.poemhunter.com/langston-hughes/poem/poet-6691/page-1/
Common – “I Use To Love Her” and “ The Corner” (featuring The Last Poets)
Sonia Sanchez – “Masks”; “Just Don’t Never Give Up On Love”; “Norma”; “Like the Singing
Coming Off the Drums”; Shake Loose My Skin”
Walt Whitman – “O Captain! My Captain!” ; “I Hear America Singing”; “Song of Myself”
William Wordsworth – “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud”; “Tintern Abbey”; “The World Is Too Much With
Us”; “The Solitary Reaper”
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Samuel Coleridge – “The Ancient Mariner”
Ntozake Shange – “Nappy Edges” excerpts from for colored girls
Nikki Giovanni – “Ego Tripping”; “Nikki-Rosa”
Gwendolyn Brooks – “We Real Cool”; “The Mother”
Gato Suertudo – “Screams of Rebellion”; “A Gangster Prayer”; “Contradicting Traditions”; “Lyrical Therapy”
Poems available at: http://www.brownpride.com/gato/default.asp
Nuyorican Poetry Movement - Including poems by Miguel Algarin
Other poets may include: Pablo Neruda; Pedro Pietri; Aurora Levins Morales; Judith Ortiz
Cofer; Jose Marti; Maya Angelou; Emily Dickinson; Dylan Thomas
Informational articles: each unit will be accompanied by informational articles and poems to help enhance the meaning of the
themes present in primary reading sources.
Supplemental Materials:
• Author biographies
• Films
• The Color Purple
• Their Eyes Were Watching God
• A Midsummer Night’s Dream
• Rosewood
• Mississippi Burning
• A Raisin in the Sun
• School Ties
• Cultural studies of:
• The Harlem Renaissance (while studying Their Eyes Were Watching God and the poetry of Langston Hughes)
• Puerto Rican migration to the United States (while studying the Nuyorican Poetry Movement)
• U.S. Civil Rights Movement of the 1960s (while studying Nikki Giovanni and Gwendolyn Brooks)
• The Romantic Period (while studying Wordsworth and Coleridge)
• Short write up Common and The Last Poets
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Major Assessments:
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4 major exams throughout the year, each including:
• a reading assessment of an unseen text;
• reading assessment based on prior class reading
• grammar assessment based on lessons taught;
• an essay judged on taught writing standard elements
5 Responses to Literature essays (with attached rubrics):
• Characterization study in response to A Midsummer Night’s Dream
• Poet study – students choose a poet from our class study and perform an in-depth study of his or her work
• Additional literary analyses by teacher’s discretion
• MLA research paper 4-5 pages
Throughout year, students will be working on several core questions. For each of the following questions students will have
written short responses. These major assignments will require revision of ideas and grammar on the previous shorter papers.
• Short Story Unit I - students will write an essay using personal experience and literature: How can sexism affect a person?
• Short story unit II- Students will write a 3-5 page paper using stories and personal experience as support: How can looking to
the past help/hurt a person/society?
• Essay on Their Eyes Were Watching God or The Color Purple 3-5 pages 5-7 for Honors (includes counter argument).
Students will use personal experience and literature as support to answer question- Can you control your own happiness?
**The Pennsylvania Holistic Scoring Guide is also attached to this document for teacher use in all writing assignments.
• Civil Rights/Women’s Rights PowerPoint Project:
• Students will research the certain topics to help them have a better understanding of the class’ novels.
The students will write short summaries and find images to put in a PowerPoint project about Jim Crow
Laws, African American Feminism and 1950’s African American Family Structure.
• ***Honors: Students will be expected to write an informational essay with details to go along with their
PowerPoint
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Poetry Project:
• Students will write a poetry collection of their own demonstrating knowledge of poetic devices and structure. Each
student will receive a pamphlet of all student poems at end of year.
Metaphor/extended metaphor
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Simile
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Concrete imagery
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Alliteration/assonance/consonance
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Rhyme Scheme
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Meter
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Personification
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Hyperbole
•
Sonnet
•
Discussed themes
Performance Standards: (taken from NCEE’s New Standards Performance Standards)
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E1a: Reads 25 Books
• Students work on this standard by reading 10 books throughout the semester. Two books are read with the course work, three
books are chosen from a generated list of genre relevant high school-level books, and five books may be chosen by the student.
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E1b: Reading Comprehension within Genres
• Students work on mastery of this standard during our poetry unit by:
• Making and supporting warranted and responsible assertions about the text;
• Supporting assertions with elaborated and convincing evidence;
• Drawing the texts together to compare and contrast themes, characters, and ideas;
• Making well-developed connections
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E2b: Response to Literature Essay Writing
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Advances a judgment
• Supports judgment with references to the text(s)
• Demonstrates understanding of the literature in study
• Anticipates and answers a reader’s questions
• Recognizes possible ambiguities in literature
• Provides a sense of closure
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E4a: Use of Grammar in Writing
• Demonstrates an understanding of the rules of the English language
• Demonstrates control of:
• Grammar
• Paragraph structure
• Punctuation
• Sentence construction
• Spelling
• Usage
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E4b: Revises Written Work
• Adds or deletes details;
• Adds or deletes explanations;
• Clarifies difficult passages;
• Rearranges words, sentences, and paragraphs to improve clarity;
• Sharpens the focus
• Reconsiders organizational structure
• Rethinks and/or rewrites the piece in light of different audiences and purposes
Pennsylvania State Standards:
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1.1.11 H Demonstrates fluency and comprehension in reading.
1.3.11A Reads and understands works of literature.
1.3.11B Analyzes the relationships, uses and effectiveness of literary elements used by one or more authors in similar genres
including characterization, setting, plot, theme, point of view, tone and style.
1.3.11D Analyzes and evaluates in poetry the appropriateness of diction and figurative language (e.g., irony, understatement,
overstatement, paradox).
1.5.11A Writes with a sharp, distinct focus
1.5.11B Writes using well-developed content appropriate for the topic.
1.5.11C Writes with controlled organization
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1.5.11D Writes with a command of the stylistic aspects of composition.
1.5.11E Revises writing to improve style, word choice, sentence variety and subtlety of meaning after rethinking how
questions of purpose, audience and genre have been addressed.
1.5.11F Edits writing using the conventions of language.
1.6.11D Contributes to discussions.
1.6.11E Participates in small and large group discussions and presentations.
Grammar Topics:
Genre Studies grammar will develop use of MLA text citations for literary analysis. Students will master mechanics of writing and
further develop writing style in various genres.
Lessons will include:
• Passive vs. active voice
• Writing about literature in the present tense
• Referring to multiple sources when writing about literature
• Further development of academic tone
• Development of thesis, position, and argument
PSSA Exam Items Addressed:
Through completing this course, students will be preparing themselves for the upcoming PSSA exam by doing the following:
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Understanding and interpreting fictional texts
Analyzing the relationships and effectiveness of literary devices
Analyzing main ideas and supporting details of texts in class
Analyzing authors’ mood and tone
Supporting a judgment with evidence from the text
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Responding to works of literature (through both formal writing and informal discussion)
SAT Exam Items Addressed:
Through completing this course, students will be preparing themselves for the upcoming SAT exam by doing the following:
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Students will learn two new words every day from popular SAT vocabulary lists
Critical reading done in class will assist students in longer and more detailed reading comprehension section
Literature read (both in class and individually as part of students’ 25 Book Campaign requirement) will help students with
critical reading sections.
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Close analysis of writing to help students with own writing and to help refine their reading strategies
Helpful Websites for Teachers of Genre Studies:
Poetry Websites:
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Sonia Sanchez poetry and information: http://college.hmco.com/english/heath/syllabuild/iguide/sanchez.html
Walt Whitman/Langston Hughes project explanation: http://edsitement.neh.gov/view_lesson_plan.asp?id=428
Lyrical Poetry Lesson: http://www.schoollink.org/csd/pages/engl/lyricpoe.html
Poetry Project: http://www.msrogers.com/English2/poetry/30_days_of_poetry.htm
Gato Suertudo’s poetry: http://www.brownpride.com/gato/default.asp
Langston Hughes’ Poetry: http://www.poemhunter.com/langston-hughes/poem/poet-6691/page-1/
Excellent lesson on finding the American Dream through poetry: http://homepages.wmich.edu/~k0turner/americandream.html
Nuyorican Sites:
http://www.nuyorican.org/Poetry/poetry.html
http://shrike.depaul.edu/~bdiaz/HCI332/nuyorican.html
http://www.puertorico-herald.org/issues/2002/vol6n02/PoetryNY-en.shtml
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Their Eyes Were Watching God Websites:
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Zora Neale Hurston Biography: http://www.gradesaver.com/ClassicNotes/Authors/about_zora_neale_hurston.html
ClassicNotes on Their Eyes Were Watching God: http://www.gradesaver.com/ClassicNotes/Titles/eyes/
Hurston as a Folklorist: http://edsitement.neh.fed.us/view_lesson_plan.asp?id=407
Useful Questions: http://www.cis.yale.edu/ynhti/curriculum/units/1988/3/88.03.03.x.html
SCORE Guide: http://www.sdcoe.k12.ca.us/score/eyes/eyetg.htm
Links to other lesson plans: http://falcon.jmu.edu/~ramseyil/hurston.htm
Excellent links to essays: http://faculty.pittstate.edu/~knichols/sistahs2.html
General Websites:
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Good general literacy links: http://www.readwritethink.org
Very valuable website on many different topics: http://www.milforded.org/teachers_rooms/highschool/english.asp
Good general resources on teaching literature: http://www.learner.org/channel/libraries/makingmeaning/
MLA citing: http://www.mla.org/
Common Proofreading Symbols: http://webster.commnet.edu/writing/symbols.htm
Lessons on a multitude of topics, literature and grammar related: http://www.lessonplanspage.com/LAJH.htm
Lesson plan links: http://www.eduhound.com/lessonplan_links.cfm
Links for teachers: http://mciu.org/~spjvweb/tealinks.html
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Unit of Study
Research/rhetoric/
reading/writing
Major Concepts
Covered
Research
Persuasive/argumentative
voice
Active reading
The Dramatic Voice
A Midsummer Night’s Dream
The Poetic Voice
Intro to Shakespearean plays
Tradition V Modern
Friendship
Love
Elements of Literature
-Definition of poetry and
poetic devices
-Traditional and nontraditional poetic forms
-Identification and usage of
common poetic devices
-Revision strategies
(6 Weeks)
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Skills Mastered
Student Products
Effective Teaching
Strategies
Reading secondary sources
Taking notes
Summarizing/paraphrasing
Outlining
Source identification and
discrimination
Identification of major claim,
argument
Identification of supports and
points
Quote integration
PowerPoint Presentation
Pre reading strategies
Modeling
-Writing dialogue
-Plot analysis
-Character analysis
-Direct quotation
-Recitation
Informational reading
Characterization study- focus
on using quotes and details
from book
-Flexible group reading
-Acting out scenes
-Historical context
-group editing
-literature circles
-daily literary response
-Free-writing
-Revision
-Use of common poetic
devices such as rhyme, meter,
alliteration, assonance,
consonance, free verse,
concrete imagery, metaphor
-Analysis of published poetry
-Direct quotation in literary
analysis
-Daily poem journal/ writer’s
notebook
-Poem Poster
-Whitman/Hughes “America”
Compare/ contrast essay
-Poetry Portfolio (including 5
original poems and a poet
study)
Memorization of 1 poem
-Creative writing: dramatic
scene
Memorization of lines
-students will write own
comedy
-Close reading
-daily writing on assigned
topics or forms
-peer critique
-whole-group revision
practice
-group readings
-poetry bulletin board
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Short Story unit
The Narrative Voice
Their Eyes Were Watching
God
or
The Color Purple
Honors: (to be added to
Narrative Voice in
conjunction with Their Eyes
Were Watching God
Sorrow’s Kitchen
Literary terms
Traditions and their role
society
Looking to the past
Moral responsibility and
personal responsibility
Feminism
- Applying
previous/background
knowledge to present
reading/writing
-Direct quotation
Character analysis
-Symbolic analysis
Thesis sentences
-African American feminism
-Cultural hegemony
-Search for personal voice
-Southern dialects
-Culture of African American
families and communities
after slavery.
Elements of Literature
-Reality as a model for art
-African American
Feminism
-Harlem Renaissance
-Thesis sentences
-Use of direct quotations in
literary response
-Character analysis
-Symbolic analysis
-Historical research skills
Informational reading
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-Use of secondary sources
- Applying
previous/background
knowledge to present
reading/writing
Essays- focus on intro,
conclusion, paragraph
structure, thesis, topic
sentences
Mini responses to stories
A short story
Discussions
Revised paper
-Argumentative paper essay
using full MLA flawlessly
with smooth quote integration
Revised paper from earlier in
year
-Weekly response
Student led discussions
Literature Circles
Historical context
-revision process, peer editing
and rough drafts
Flexible group reading
Predictions
Pre/after reading strategies
-Web and Skeleton models
for symbolism essay.
-T- Chart for compare and
contrast essay
-revision process, peer
editing and rough drafts
-Weekly responses
- Literature Circles
- Peer revision/ editing
- Graphic organizers for essay
- library demonstration on
research techniques
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Rubric for small one-paragraph response essays (given regularly)
Point Equivalent
Criteria
Standard
0-1
No Attempt to
Meet Standard
2
Little attempt to
meet standard
3
Needs Revision
No topic sentence
Topic sentence does
not match up with the
paragraph
Topic sentence is not
general but specific
only to the example
used
Topic sentence is
present and relates to
the rest of the
paragraph
No specific example is
used
Example doesn’t
illustrate topic
sentence well
Students uses an
example but is not
specific
Student uses specific
example that fits into
paragraph
No concluding
sentence—paragraph
ends with example
details
Concluding sentence
is not related to
paragraph
Concluding sentence
does not explain
example
Concluding sentence
explains example
A (answer question
with topic sentence)
C(cite an specific
example)
E2a E2b
E (explain with a
concluding example
(E2a
Total _____________/5
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4
Meets Standard
5
Exceeds
Standard
Weighting
Topic sentence is
present and related to
the rest of the
paragraph and written
with mature/academic
voice
Example is used, well
supported and
detailed
X1/5
Concluding sentence
explains example and
finalizes the paragraph
X1/5
X1/5
Letter Grade: _______________
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Scoring Rubric for Short Story Essay 1
Point Equivalent
Criteria
Standard
0-1
No Attempt to Meet
Standard
2
Little attempt to
meet standard
3
Needs Revision
First sentence is the
thesis, or has nothing to
do with the paper topic
First sentence is
engaging, but does not
relate well to the overall
theme of the paper
First sentence is
engaging and introduces
the overall theme of the
paper
Thesis: makes a
statement on the
effects of chosen
topic
(E2b E2f)
There is no thesis
There is an attempt at a
thesis but thesis is not
aligned with topic of
paper
Thesis is unclear or
placed in awkward
position
Provides a sense of
closure
(E2a E2f)
No conclusion or is weak
-only summarizes rest of
essay
Conclusion attempts
using suggested
strategies from class but
gets off topic
Paragraph
structure
E2a E2f
No use of ACEparagraph is unstructured
and lacks specific
examples
Paragraph attempts ACE
but not efficiently
Conclusion attempts
using suggested
strategies from class but
is too short and
undeveloped
Paragraph is missing 2
of the elements of ACE
Mechanics (E4a)
Essay has more than 8
mechanics errors.
Essay 7-8 mechanics
errors
Essay has 4-6
mechanics errors.
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5
Exceeds
Standard
Engaging opening
E2a E2f
Total: ___________/25
4
Meets Standard
Weighting
First sentence is
engaging and introduces
the overall theme of the
paper and attempts
providing background,
using quotes or
discussing related topics
Thesis is clear and takes
a stance but wording is
awkward
First sentence is
extremely engaging and
introduces the topic
smoothly by providing
background, using
quotes or discussing
related topics
Students has a clear
thesis with a stance
x1
Conclusion attempts
using suggested
strategies from class
Conclusion successfully
uses strategies from
class.
x1
Paragraph is missing one
element of ACE
Paragraph is well written
using all elements of
ACE successfully.
x1
Essay has 2-3 mechanics
errors.
Percentage: _____________%
x1
Essay has NO
mechanics errors.
x1
Letter Grade: _______________
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Characterization Analysis Rubric
Substandard
Engaging
opening
E2a E2f
No Attempt Made (0-1)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Comments
Makes little or no attempt to
include an engaging first
sentence
First sentence is engaging, but
does not relate well to the
overall theme of the paper
First sentence is engaging and
introduces the overall theme of
the paper
X1
Analyzes a
character of
significance;
accurately
describes
character E2b
E2f
Has a thesis
sentence E2b E2f
A weak character or situation
is chosen or character is
incorrectly described
Character or situation is
chosen, but one that lacks
development and details
Character or situation is
chosen that can be developed
with details
First sentence is extremely
engaging and introduces the
topic smoothly by providing
background, using quotes or
discussing related topics
An excellent character or
situation is chosen that is
well-developed with details
Has no thesis sentence
Thesis sentence is vague or
lost in the paragraph
Thesis is present.
X1
Paragraph
structure
E2a E2f
No use of ACE- paragraph is
unstructured and lacks specific
examples
Paragraph is missing 2 of the
elements of ACE
Paragraph is missing one
element of ACE
An excellent thesis is
present clearly stating the
main idea of the paper
Paragraph is well written
using all elements of ACE
successfully.
Closing paragraph makes some
attempt to finalize the essay,
but still leaves the reader with
s sense of incompleteness
3-5 major grammar errors
Closing paragraph sums up the
essay and leaves the reader
with a sense of completeness
Closing paragraph ends the
essay beautifully and leaves
the reader extremely
satisfied.
No errors
X1
Sense of closure
E2a E2f
Grammar (E4a)
Use of quote E5b
Closing paragraph introduces
new ideas and/or does not
give a finished sense to the
character
Grammar errors are so
numerous that comprehension
is affected
No quote is used
Total Points Earned: ________/45
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X1
X3
X1
Quote is used, but quote
chosen does not fit in paper or
is not documented
x2 = ____________90
Quote is used well and there is
an attempt at documentation,
but documentation is not done
properly
Quote is used well and
documented properly.
Percentage: _________________
X1
Letter Grade: ______________
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Write Your Own Play
Substandard
Needs Major Revision (12)
Needs Some Revision (3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Comments
Form- dialogue
and stage
directions
E2d E5b
There are no stage directions
and/or who is talking is not
clear
Stage directions are
incomplete and/or who is
talking is not clear in some
parts
Stage directions are helpful at
most points and speaker is
clear
Play is written following
the traditional form of a
play so that stage direction
and speaker are clear
X3
Elements of
comedy (use of
the major 5)
E2d E5b
All or most of the elements
are missing or used
ineffectively.
Missing 2-3 elements
All elements are attempted,
but are not use efficiently or
effectively
Students includes all 5 of
the major elements of
comedy
X4
Character
development
(significant and
developed)
E2d E5b
Characters are all flat and not
necessary to the story. No
difference between major and
minor characters
Protagonist and other major
characters are not fully
developed, but better
developed than minor
characters
Protagonist and other major
characters are well developed
with a few incongruities
Students creates characters
that are significant to the
story and are well
developed
X2
Literary
elements (plot,
setting and
conflict)
E2d E5b
The plot, setting and conflict
are non existent or
inconsistent.
Play is missing one element
or several of the elements are
not fully developed.
All elements are present with
only a few incongruities
All three of the mention
literary terms are
developed and effective
X3
Total Points Earned: ________/60
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Percentage: _________________
Letter Grade: ______________
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Rubric research paper
Substandard
Engaging
opening
E2a
Academic
language
Has a thesis
sentence
E2b
Paragraph
structure
E2a
No Attempt Made (0-1)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Comments
Makes little or no attempt to
include an engaging first
sentence
First sentence is engaging, but
does not relate well to the
overall theme of the paper
First sentence is engaging and
introduces the overall theme of
the paper
First sentence is extremely
engaging and introduces the
topic smoothly by providing
background, using quotes or
discussing related topics
X2
X2
Has no thesis sentence
Thesis sentence is vague or
lost in the paragraph
Thesis is present.
An excellent thesis is
present clearly stating the
main idea of the paper
X2
No use of ACE- paragraph is
unstructured and lacks specific
examples
Paragraph is missing 2 of the
elements of ACE
Paragraph is missing one
element of ACE
Paragraph is well written
using all elements of ACE
successfully.
X3
Closing paragraph makes some
attempt to finalize the essay,
but still leaves the reader with
s sense of incompleteness
3-5 major grammar errors
Closing paragraph sums up the
essay and leaves the reader
with a sense of completeness
Closing paragraph ends the
essay beautifully and leaves
the reader extremely
satisfied.
No errors
X2
Closing paragraph introduces
new ideas and/or does not
give a finished sense to the
character
Grammar (E4a) Grammar errors are so
numerous that comprehension
is affected
Much of the information is
Accuracy
inaccurate; paper shows little
research
No quote is used
Quoting
Sense of closure
E2a
E5b
Transitions
No transitions or do not
transition well
Total Points Earned: ________/90
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1-2 major grammar errors
X1
Some information is
inaccurate; papers shows a lack
of understanding of research
Quote is used, but quote
chosen does not fit in paper or
is not documented
Very little misinterpretation of
literature
All information is
researched and accurate
X3
Quote is used well and there is
an attempt at documentation,
but documentation is not done
properly
Quote is used well and
documented properly.
X2
Transitions seem forced
Transition are present and
create cohesiveness
Transitions create
cohesiveness and use
academic sentence
structure
X1
Percentage: _________________
Letter Grade: ______________
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Scoring Rubric Compare/Contrast essay poetry
Standard
No attempt is
made (0-1)
Little attempt
made (2)
Needs
Remediation (3)
Meets Standard
(4)
Exceeds
Standard (5)
COMMENTS
First sentence is
engaging and introduces
the overall theme of the
paper and attempts
providing background,
using quotes or
discussing related topics
Students makes an
accurate interpretation of
poem but is worded
awkwardly
Paragraph is missing one
element of ACE
First sentence is
extremely engaging and
introduces the topic
smoothly by providing
background, using quotes
or discussing related
topics
Students has brief, clear,
interpretative thesis
X2
Paragraph is well written
using all elements of ACE
successfully.
X3
Engaging
opening
E2a E2f
First sentence is the
thesis, or has nothing to
do with the paper topic
First sentence is
engaging, but does not
relate well to the overall
theme of the paper
First sentence is
engaging and introduces
the overall theme of the
paper
Makes an
interpretation
E2b E2f
Paragraph
structure
E2a E2f
Student makes no
interpretation of poempoem is summarized
Little attempt at
interpretation is made;
however, it is inaccurate
Students interprets
poem, but some points
are inaccurate
No use of ACEparagraphs are short
paragraph are
unstructured and lacks
specific examples
Paragraph is missing 2
of the elements of ACE
Makes reference
to the texts E5b
None
Vague references to the
poems
Student refers to poem,
but does not quote
Refers to poems with
quotes but does not
document
Poem is referenced,
quoted and documented
X2
Provides a sense
of closure
(E2a E2f)
Student summarizes the
entire essay
Conclusion does not stick
to paper—it brings up
new ideas
Conclusion tries to use
one of the strategies
discussed in class but
falls short
Conclusion successfully
uses strategies form
class, but doesn’t tie it
back to thesis
X2
Mechanics (E4a
E2f)
Formorganization
and transitions
for
compare/contra
st essay (E2f
Essay has more than 8
mechanics errors.
Essay 7-8 mechanics
errors
Essay has 4-6 mechanics
errors.
Essay has 2-3 mechanics
errors.
Conclusion is refreshing
and helpful leaving
readers satisfied but
wanting to read more on
the topic.
Essay has NO mechanics
errors.
Paper does not compare
and contrast
Paper compares and
contrasts but organization
is not clear and causes
confusion
Organization of paper
does not cause
confusion but it is not
the most logical choice
Organization allows
reader to smoothly move
from point to point
without misunderstanding
or questions
X3
Total: ___________/75
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Paper is organize in a way
that is effective and
efficient
X2
X1
Letter Grade: _______________
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Scoring Rubric for Short Story Essay 2 and novel essay
Point Equivalent
Criteria
Standard
-1
No Attempt to Meet
Standard
2
Little attempt to
meet standard
3
Needs Revision
4
Meets Standard
Exceeds
Standard
COMMENTS
First sentence is extremely
engaging and introduces the
topic smoothly by
providing background,
using quotes or discussing
related topics
Goes above and
beyond showing
comprehension of
event and makes
mature judgments and
connections.
Quote is used well,
documented flawlessly and
integrated flawlessly
X2
Engaging opening
E2a E2f
First sentence is the thesis, or
has nothing to do with the
paper topic
First sentence is engaging,
but does not relate well to
the overall theme of the
paper
First sentence is engaging
and introduces the overall
theme of the paper
Thesis: makes a
statement on the
effects of chosen topic
E2b E2f
No effort is made to show the
effect/significance
Statement makes little
effort to show
understanding of the
significance/ effect of
event.
Some failure at showing the
effect/significance of event.
Quoting
E5b
No quote is used
Quote is used, but quote
chosen does not fit in paper
or is not documented
Quote is used well and
there is an attempt at
documentation, but
documentation is not done
properly
Quote is used well and
documented properly.
Provides a sense of
closure
E2a E2f
No attempt to restate thesis;
new information is presented
in the closing paragraph; no
sense of closure.
Closing sums up all main
points very neatly and ends
with a HUGE BANG!!
X2
No use of ACE- paragraphs
are short w
Closing paragraph does not
restate the main points of
the essay enough; closing
has somewhat of a
“clincher” last sentence.
Paragraph is missing 2 of
the elements of ACE
Closing paragraph restates
the main points of the essay
and has a “clincher” last
sentence.
Paragraph structure
E2a E2f
Closing paragraph
introduces new ideas and/or
does not restate the thesis;
closing does not have a
“clincher” last sentence.
Paragraphs are unstructured
and lacks specific examples
Paragraph is missing one
element of ACE
Paragraph is well written
using all elements of ACE
successfully.
X3
Mechanics (E4a)
Essay has more than 8
mechanics errors.
Argument makes no sense and
has inaccurate information
Essay 7-8 mechanics errors
Essay has 4-6 mechanics
errors.
Students logic has holes or
some of the information is
inaccurate
Essay has 2-3 mechanics
errors.
Argument is well thought out
and information is accurate
Accuracy and logic of
argument
E2f
Total: ___________/65
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Students logic has holes
and some of the
information is inaccurate
Percentage: _____________%
First sentence is engaging
and introduces the overall
theme of the paper and
attempts providing
background, using quotes
or discussing related topics
Shows understanding of the
effect/significance of the
event
5
Essay has NO mechanics
errors.
Argument uses good logic
and all information is
accurately detailed
X2
X2
X1
X1
Letter Grade: _______________
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Pennsylvania Writing Assessment Holistic Scoring Guide
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5
4
3
2
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Focus
sharp, distinct focus
clear focus
adequate focus
Vague focus
confused focus
absence of focus
Content
Substantive, specific
and/ or illustrative
content; sophisticated
ideas that are
particularly well
developed
specific and
illustrative content
sufficient content
content limited to a
listing, repetition or
mere sequence of
ideas
superficial content
absence of relevant
content
inconsistent
organization
confused
organization
absence of
organization
Organization obviously controlled
and/ or subtle
organization
logical and appropriate appropriate
organization
organization
Style
writer’s choice apparent precision and variety
in tone, sentence
in sentence structure
structure and word
and word choice
choice
some precision and
variety in sentence
structure and word
choice
limited sentence
variety and word
choice
Lack of sentence and no apparent control
word choice variety over sentence structure
and word choice
Conventions
few mechanical and
usage errors
mechanical and usage
errors not severe
enough to interfere
significantly with the
writer’s purpose
repeated weaknesses
in mechanics and
usage
mechanical and
usage errors that
seriously interfere
with the writer’s
purpose
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usage errors
mechanical and usage
error so severe that
writer’s ideas are
difficult, if not
impossible, to
understand
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Nonscorable
Is illegible i.e.; includes so many undecipherable words that
no sense can be made of the response
Focus
Demonstrates an awareness of
audience and task.
Establishes and maintains a
clear purpose.
Sustains single point of view.
Exhibits clarity of ideas.
Content
Information and details are
specific to topic.
Information and details are
relevant to focus.
Ideas are fully developed.
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Is incoherent, i.e.: words are legible but syntax is so
garbled that the report makes no sense
Organization
Logical order of sequence is
maintained.
Paragraphs deal with one
subject.
Logical transitions are made
within sentences between and
paragraphs.
Introduction and conclusion
are evident.
Style
Precise language.
Effective word choice.
Voice, tone originality of
language.
Variety of sentence structures,
types and lengths.
Conventions
Mechanics: spelling,
capitalization, punctuation.
Usage (e.g. pronoun
references, subject-verb
agreement).
Sentence completeness.
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ACCOMODATIONS:
HONORS:
Novel:
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Teacher may choose: Their Eyes Were Watching God by Zora Neale Hurston
The Color Purple by Alice Walker
***Honors: Sorrow’s Kitchen by Mary E. Lyons
4 major Response to Literature essays (with attached rubrics):
Argumentative paper Their Eyes Were Watching God or The Color Purple
Characterization study in response to A Midsummer Night’s Dream
Poet study – students choose a poet from our class study and perform an in-depth study of his or her work
Poem comparison – students compare Walt Whitman’s “I Hear America Singing” and Langston Hughes’ “I, Too,
Hear America Singing.”
• ***Honors: Students will be expected to write an informational essay that details an aspect of Hurston’s
life using Sorrow’s Kitchen
General expectations for levels of text interpretation and quality of writing/presenting will be higher for all assignments
More independent performance and greater depth of group discussions during whole-class time and literature circles
Students will be expected to give more analytical responses to literature
Students papers will be more analytical
Students will read secondary sources and discuss them
All papers must be typed with proper MLA format and citation
SPECIAL EDUCATION
• Students will be given modified writing assignments
• Students will receive shorter writing assignments or extended due dates
• Students will be given accommodated exams
• Students will be given cut version of A Midsummer Night’s Dream, the modern English version and notes.
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U.S. Literature: Course Overview
Course Description:
United States Literature is an in-depth and critical look at key literature from United States authors. The course is extremely writingintensive, focusing on the Response to Literature standard. In addition to analyzing the texts of the course, students study the cultural
and historical themes of the novels studied, in an effort to understand the vast and varied nature of what is called U.S. Literature. The
novels chosen for this course take into consideration the multicultural and bi-gender nature of United States literature, including texts
from the African-American, Asian-American, and female perspectives, as well as reflect different time periods in American History.
Major Texts:
*Items in red are recommended but not currently read
Early America: Colonialism & Puritanism
The Crucible Arthur Miller
“Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God” Jonathan Edwards
Selected other texts from Prentice Hall Literature: The American Experience
19th Century: (From Prentice Hall Literature: The American Experience)
“Fall of the House of Usher” Edgar Allen Poe
“Legend of Sleepy Hollow” Washington Irving
selections from Civil Disobedience Thoreau
selections from Nature and Self Reliance Emerson
Poetry: Emily Dickenson, Walt Whitman, Langston Hughes
20th Century (CHOOSE 2)
The Catcher in the Rye
The Joy Luck Club
The Bluest Eye
The Great Gatsby
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Supplemental Materials:
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Prentice Hall Literature: The American Experience
The Catcher in the Rye novel unit and student packet
The Joy Luck Club novel unit and student packet
The Bluest Eye novel unit and student packet
The Great Gatsby novel unit and student packet
NEA Grammar Packet Level 3
Author biographies (Salinger, Tan, Morrison, Fitzgerald)
Films:
Pleasantville (for use with Catcher in the Rye)
The Joy Luck Club
Becoming American: The Chinese Experience (for use with The Joy Luck Club)
The Great Gatsby
F. Scott Fitzgerald: American Dreamer
Cultural studies of:
- The “American Dream” (course introductory unit)
Poetry and Song Lyrics: What does it mean to be an American?
“For What it’s Worth” Buffalo Springfield
“I Am Joaquin” Rodolfo Gonzalez
“Let America Be America Again” Langston Hughes
“Proud to Be an American” Lee Greenwood
“America” Neil Diamond
“This Land Is Your Land” Woody Guthrie
- Cultural Assimilation (with The Joy Luck Club)
“The Story of Chinatown” (PBS print and Internet resource guide)
- Teenage Depression (with The Catcher in the Rye)
- The 1950’s ideal of the “perfect life” and the “American Dream” (Catcher in the Rye)
- Ideals of beauty and racial identity in the United States (with The Bluest Eye)
“A Letter to My Daughter of the Occasion of Considering Racism in the United States”
Excerpts from No Disrespect by Sister Souljah and Makes Me Wanna Holler by Nathan McCall
- The Roaring Twenties (The Great Gatsby)
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Major Assessments:
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2 major exams throughout the semester, each including:
• a reading assessment of an unseen text;
• reading assessment based on prior class reading;
• grammar assessment based on lessons taught;
• an essay judged on taught writing standard elements
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2 major Response to Literature essays (with attached rubric):
• Students will produce a major response to literature essay for each of the novels read in class
• One response in narrative form
• One response in analytical form
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1 major 3-part response to American author (poet or novelist) comparing and contrasting the idea of what it means to
be an American (with attached rubric):
• Research of author’s life and works
• Literary analysis of 2-3 works by the author
• Connection to time period of American culture
Regular Reflective Journals
• Students will respond to journal prompts related to the reading to practice expressing and defending their personal
opinions and reactions
Honors accommodations:
Exams: further development of critical thinking skills
Response to Literature essays: more freedom over topic choice
American Author project: incorporate formal multimedia presentation
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Performance Standards Addressed:
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E1a: Reads 25 Books
• Students work on this standard by reading 8 books throughout the semester. Four books are read with the course work, and other
books may be chosen by the student.
E1b: Reading Comprehension within Genres
• Students work on mastery of this standard during the semester by:
• Making and supporting warranted and responsible assertions about the text;
• Supporting assertions with elaborated and convincing evidence;
• Drawing the texts together to compare and contrast themes, characters, and ideas;
• Making well-developed connections
E2b: Response to Literature Essay Writing
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Advances a judgment
• Supports judgment with references to the text(s)
• Demonstrates understanding of the literature in study
• Anticipates and answers a reader’s questions
• Recognizes possible ambiguities in literature
• Provides a sense of closure
E4a: Use of Grammar in Writing
• Demonstrates an understanding of the rules of the English language
• Demonstrates control of:
• Grammar
• Paragraph structure
• Punctuation
• Sentence construction
• Spelling
• Usage
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E4b: Revises Written Work
• Adds or deletes details;
• Adds or deletes explanations;
• Clarifies difficult passages;
• Rearranges words, sentences, and paragraphs to improve clarity;
• Sharpens the focus
• Reconsiders organizational structure
• Rethinks and/or rewrites the piece in light of different audiences and purposes
Pennsylvania State Standards:
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1.1.11 C Use knowledge of root words and words from literary works to recognize and understand the meaning of new words during reading.
1.1.11 D Identify, describe, evaluate, and synthesize the essential ideas in text.
1.1.11 E Establish a reading vocabulary by identifying and correctly using new words acquired through the study of their relationships to other words.
Use a dictionary or related reference.
1.1.11 G Demonstrate after reading understanding and interpretation of both fiction and nonfiction text
1.1.11 H Demonstrates fluency and comprehension in reading.
1.2.11 B Use and understand a variety of media and evaluate the quality of material produced.
1.2.11 C Produce work in at least one literary genre that follows the conventions of that genre.
1.3.11A Reads and understands works of literature.
1.3.11B Analyzes the relationships, uses and effectiveness of literary elements used by one or more authors in similar genres including
characterization, setting, plot, theme, point of view, tone and style.
1.3.11C Analyze the effectiveness, in terms of literary quality, of the author’s use of literary devices
1.4.11 C Write persuasive pieces
1.5.11A Writes with a sharp, distinct focus
1.5.11B Writes using well-developed content appropriate for the topic.
1.5.11C Writes with controlled organization
1.5.11D Writes with a command of the stylistic aspects of composition.
1.5.11E Revises writing to improve style, word choice, sentence variety and subtlety of meaning after rethinking how questions of purpose, audience
and genre have been addressed.
1.5.11F Edits writing using the conventions of language.
1.6.11 A Listen to others
1.6.11 C Speak using skills appropriate to formal speech situations
1.6.11D Contributes to discussions.
1.6.11E Participates in small and large group discussions and presentations.
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Resource List
Gatsby/The “American Dream” Websites:
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A Webquest studying the American Dream through the decades: http://memory.loc.gov/learn/lessons/97/dream/
Studying the American Dream through music: http://www.rockhall.com/programs/plandetail.asp?id=535
Virtual Museum webquest studying the American Dream (may be relevant):
http://cte.jhu.edu/techacademy/web/2000/kajder/wqmain.html
Some really creative lesson ideas involving drama: http://school.discovery.com/lessonplans/programs/greatbooks-greatgatsby/
Historical context of Gatsby: http://memory.loc.gov/learn/lessons/01/mayhem/overview.html
Excellent lesson ideas:
http://www.glc.k12.ga.us/seqlps/sudspres.asp?SUID=211&SSUID=200&SSTitle=American+Literature+
Good lesson on social class: http://edsitement.neh.gov/view_lesson_plan.asp?id=432
Catcher in the Rye Websites:
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Character Lists and Chapter Summaries: http://www.sparknotes.com/lit/catcher/
Good lesson using literature circles; can be modified without using computers:
http://www.readwritethink.org/lessons/lesson_view.asp?id=279
A bit hard to read, but excellent journal ideas and writing prompts:
http://www.d.umn.edu/~lmillerc/TeachingEnglishHomePage/TeachingUnits/blambert.html
Provides excellent historical events of the 1950s: http://balrog.sdsu.edu/~putman/410b/50samericalspln.htm
Study questions: http://theliterarylink.com/catcherss.html
Great Sample student essay: http://theliterarylink.com/catcherrr.html
Salinger Website: http://www.salinger.org/
Huge collection of essays and links: http://www.litplans.com/author.htm?a=Salinger
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Joy Luck Club Websites:
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Vocabulary and Questions:
http://www.phschool.com/curriculum_support/penguin_lit_library/pdfs/PLL_TT_JoyLuck_read.pdf
Interesting lesson plan: http://gc2000.rutgers.edu/GC2000/MODULES/GLOBAL_LIT/JOYLUCKLesson.htm
Interesting project on researching your past: http://www.bcpl.net/~dcurtis/psd/handouts/s1-5/comp.html
Provides good background information on China (scroll down):
http://www.urbandreamsproject.org/lessonplans/wildswans/resources.html
Interesting links to essays and articles on China: http://www.globaled.org/chinaproject/c_teaching.php
The Bluest Eye Websites:
• Huge collection of essays and links: http://www.litplans.com/author.htm?a=Morrison
• Links to essays on Morrison: http://www.academicinfo.net/amlitmorrison.html
• Great study guide and resources: http://web.cocc.edu/lisal/thebluesteye/index.html
• A cultural lesson plan: http://www.cis.yale.edu/ynhti/curriculum/units/1992/4/92.04.10.x.html#g
• Excellent scholarly articles: http://faculty.pittstate.edu/~knichols/sistahs2.html
• Great supplementary articles on beauty: http://www.maxwell.syr.edu/plegal/tips/t4prod/bisguier/resourcespage.htm
• Multicultural women writers: http://www.uh.edu/hti/cu/2003/v04/06.htm
General Websites:
• Good general literacy links: http://www.readwritethink.org
• Very valuable website on many different topics: http://www.milforded.org/teachers_rooms/highschool/english.asp
• Good general resources on teaching literature: http://www.learner.org/channel/libraries/makingmeaning/
• MLA citing: http://www.mla.org/
• Common Proofreading Symbols: http://webster.commnet.edu/writing/symbols.htm
• Lessons on a multitude of topics, literature and grammar related: http://www.lessonplanspage.com/LAJH.htm
• Lesson plan links: http://www.eduhound.com/lessonplan_links.cfm
• Links for teachers: http://mciu.org/~spjvweb/tealinks.html
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Unit of Study
Major Concepts Covered
Skills Mastered
Student Products
What does it mean
to be an American?
The American Dream
• The ideal vs. reality of
American life
• What defines one’s
definition of what it
means to be an
American? (race, class,
gender)
Major Events in American
History
• Read and analyze song lyrics and
poems about life in America
• Share reaction with other students
• Take notes and learn to identify major
events in U.S. history that have shaped
attitude and thought
The Catcher in the
Rye
The Fabulous Fifties
• Appearance vs. Reality
• “The Perfect Life”
• Watch and analyze the film
Pleasantville
• Identify criticisms of the 1950s lifestyle
and attitude
• Identify major aspects of plot,
characters, and setting
• Identify major literary themes
• Express personal reactions
• Analyze Holden’s character
• Analysis of Salinger’s writing style
• Learn new vocabulary
• Implement formal essay format and
style rules
• Plan and write a Response to Literature
Essay
• Song/poem analysis
worksheet
• Ideal/Reality
worksheet
• Interview a family
member about
opinions of living in
America
• Journal topic: What
does it mean to you
to live in America?
• Students find their
own song or poem
that reflects the
author’s feelings
about America
• Quiz on major events
in U.S. history
• Film analysis
worksheet
• Journal reaction
• answer chapter
reading
comprehension
questions
• complete character
charts
• complete lot outline
• complete a
“Character Quilt” for
one of the main
characters
Reading and Analysis of
Novel
Writing a Response to
Literature Essay
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Strategies
• Teacher facilitated
discussions
• Lecture
• Student jigsaw
• Film
• Teacher facilitated
discussions
• Student and teacher readaloud
• Lectures
• Teacher facilitated
discussions and note
taking
• Teacher facilitated
student group work and
presentations
• Teacher generated study
guides and review sheets
• Literature circles
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Unit of Study
Major Concepts Covered
The Catcher in the
Rye (cont.)
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• Revise a formal essay and use a
grading rubric
Student Products
Suggested Teaching
Strategies
• Complete quote
analysis charts
• Create and respond
to higher level
critical thinking
questions about
major themes
• Create posters
detailing major
symbols in the
novel
• Write pen-pal
letters to students
in other U.S.
Literature courses
about reactions to
novel
• Journal reactions
• Write a letter to
Holden’s parents
from his therapist
explaining the
causes of his
problems
• Complete a “Close
Reading” of a short
passage
• Participate in
Literature Circles
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Unit of Study
Major Concepts Covered
Skills Mastered
The Catcher in the
Rye (cont.)
The Joy Luck
Club
Chinese Immigration to
America
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• Read and discuss “The Story of
Chinatown” (PBS article)
• Read first-person “Eye Witness
Accounts” of Chinese immigrants
(PBS website)
• Watch The Chinese Experience
(PBS documentary)
Student Products
• Record sentences
containing new
vocabulary
• Vocabulary quizzes
• Complete formal
essay format and
style rules packet
• Complete formal
essay planning
packet (outline,
thesis, engaging
beginning, topic
sentences, the
“quote sandwich”,
conclusion)
• Rough draft
Final typed essay
• Chinese-American
note-taking
handout
• Chinese-American
quiz
Suggested Teaching
Strategies
• Teacher and student
read-aloud
• Teacher facilitated
whole class discussions
• Teacher facilitated
group work and small
discussions
• Teacher generated study
guides and review
sheets
• Teacher facilitated
group work and
presentations
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Unit of Study
The Joy Luck
Club (cont.)
Major Concepts Covered
Reading and Analysis of
Novel
Writing a Response to
Literature Essay
Skills Mastered
• Identify major aspects of plot,
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characters, and setting
Analyze major characters
Identify major themes
Express personal reactions
Personally identify with major
themes
Analyze Tan’s writing style
Learn new vocabulary
Watch and analyze film version of
the novel
Review formal essay rules and
organization
Student Products
Suggested Teaching
Strategies
• Answer chapter
reading
comprehension
questions
• Complete character
charts
• Complete story
analysis chart for
each section and
for each motherdaughter
relationship
• Complete a “Body
Biography” in
groups OR a
“Mother-Daughter
Relationship”
group presentation
project
• Complete quote
analysis charts
• Write in journal
• Write an “I am
From” poem
• Write a narrative
concentrating on
descriptive
writing, conflict,
and teaching a
moral
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Unit of Study
Major Concepts Covered
Skills Mastered
The Joy Luck
Club (cont.)
The Bluest Eye
What is America’s
definition of beauty
• Analyze magazine, movie, TV
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How does racism affect
the aggressor and the
victim?
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Toni Morrison
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Reading and Analysis of
Novel
Writing a Response to
Literature Essay
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depictions of beauty
Read and analyze “A Letter to My
Daughter on the Occasion of
Considering Racism in the United
States”
Read excerpts from Sister Souljah’s
No Disrespect
Read biographical information
article
Identify major aspects of plot,
characters, and setting
Analyze major themes
Express personal reactions
Analyze Morrison’s writing style
Learn new vocabulary
Review formal essay rules and
organization
Student Products
• Peer edit another
student’s narrative
• Record sentences
containing new
vocabulary
• Vocabulary
quizzes
• Film analysis
worksheet
• Create outline,
choose quotes,
write rough draft
• Final typed essay
• Create collages of
magazine pictures
and
advertisements
representing
beauty
• Journal response
• Racism response
handout
• Complete Toni
Morrison handout
• Answer chapter
reading
comprehension
questions
• Complete
character charts
Suggested Teaching
Strategies
• Student and teacher
read aloud
• Teacher facilitated
discussions
• Teacher generated
study guides and
review sheets
• Teacher facilitated
student group work
and presentations
Teacher facilitated small
group discussions
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Unit of Study
Major Concepts Covered
Skills Mastered
The Bluest Eye
(cont.)
The Great
Gatsby
The Roaring Twenties,
the Lost Generation,
and F. Scott Fitzgerald
Reading and Analysis of
Novel
Writing a Response to
Literature Essay
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• Read and discuss articles about the
1920s
• Analyze photographs and
advertisements from the 1920s
• Browse 1920s websites (extracredit)
• Watch F. Scott Fitzgerald: An
American Dreamer (A & E
documentary)
Student Products
• Complete plot
outline Complete
quote analysis
charts
• Complete handout
on how racism
affects each victim
and causes
internalized racism
• Complete a “close
reading”
• Record sentences
using new
vocabulary
• Vocabulary
quizzes
• Create outline,
choose quotes,
write rough draft
• Final typed essay
• Complete the
Roaring Twenties
and Fitzgerald
note-taking
handout
• Answer chapter
reading
comprehension
questions
• Complete plot
outline
Suggested Teaching
Strategies
• Film
• Student and teacher
read aloud
Teacher facilitated
discussions
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Unit of Study
Major Concepts Covered
• Read article about F. Scott
Fitzgerald
• Identify major aspects of plot,
characters, and setting
• Identify major themes
• Analyze major characters
• Understand importance of setting
Review formal essay rules and
organization
The Great
Gatsby (cont.)
Recap: What
does it mean to be
an American?
Compare and Contrast
Essay
Final Creative Project
Grammar
Skills Mastered
NEA Grammar
Curriculum Level 3
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• Review formal essay rules and
organization
• Analyze what it means to be an
American to character from each
novel
• Identify reasons for each character’s
differing opinion of America
See grammar Level 3 table of contents
Student Products
Suggested Teaching
Strategies
• Complete
character charts
• Create a
“Literature Guide”
for each chapter
(using Sparknotes
format as a
guideline)
• Complete quote
analysis charts
• Complete a “Body
Biography” (group
project)
• Create “The Great
Gatsby Setting
Map” (group
project)
• Create outline,
choose quotes,
write rough draft
• Final typed essay
• Completed essay
• Create project
• Present to class
Daily POD activities,
homework,
worksheets, quizzes
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Standard
Engaging opening
(E2b substandard
1)
Little attempt made (0-1)
Response to Literature Rubric
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Opening paragraph does not
introduce the topic and does not
engage the reader; thesis is not
evident
No clear thesis is evident
Opening paragraph has some
engaging qualities, but does not
provide the reader with a clear
idea of the topic.
A thesis is included, but is not
clearly stated enough
Opening paragraph is engaging
and provides the reader with a
clear idea of the topic
Opening paragraph is very
engaging and provides a very
clear idea of the topic
Thesis demonstrates an
understanding of the work and
shows higher level thinking
Thesis goes above and beyond
showing comprehension and
makes mature judgments and
connections.
Uses no quotes and/or direct
references to the text
Uses quotes and references to
the text, but does not relate
them to the judgment being
made. Quotes are not properly
documented.
Uses quotes and references to
the text that relate directly to
the judgment being made, and
documents them correctly.
Uses many quotes and
references to the text that are
both documented correctly
and integrated well into the
paper.
Demonstrates
understanding of
the text (E2b,
substandard 4)
Overall
organization
Exhibits very little
understanding of the text.
Some understanding of the text
is evident, but has some errors
in comprehension and logic.
Exhibits understanding of the
text.
Exhibits a very high and
mature understanding of the
text.
Does not write in clear
paragraphs; little or no effort
made to create a proper sense of
flow within writing
Writes in some sense of
paragraphs, but fails to include
effective topic sentences and
transitions
Writes in clear paragraph
structure with proper attention
to topic sentences and
transitions.
Provides a sense
of closure
(E2b substandard
7)
Closing paragraph introduces
new ideas and/or does not
restate the thesis; closing does
not have a “clincher” last
sentence.
Essay has a large number of
grammar errors and makes the
essay illegible
Closing paragraph does not
restate the main points of the
essay enough; closing has
somewhat of a “clincher” last
sentence.
Essay has significant grammar
errors that take away from the
effectiveness of the essay
Closing paragraph restates the
main points of the essay and has
a “clincher” last sentence.
Paragraph structure is near
flawless, with special
attention to strong topic
sentences, transitions, and
mature sentence
development throughout.
Closing sums up all main
points very neatly and ends
with a HUGE BANG!!
Makes an
interpretation
(has a thesis)
(E2b substandard
2)
Uses references to
the text to
support thesis
(E2b substandard
3)
Mechanics (E4a)
Total: ___________/35
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Essay has some minor grammar
errors, but writing is mostly
grammatically correct.
Percentage: _____________%
COMMENTS
Essay has NO mechanics
errors.
Letter Grade: ______________
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British Literature Course Overview
Course Description:
British Literature is an in-depth and critical look at key literature from England, from early epic poetry to modern day novels. The
course is extremely writing-intensive, focusing on the Response to Literature standard, with an emphasis on literary and cultural
analysis. In addition to analyzing the texts of the course, students study the historical themes of the works, in an effort to understand
the vast and varied nature of what the British tradition is in literature. The texts chosen for this course provide students with a
comprehensive look at the genres of novel, poetry, theatrical drama, and film.
Major Texts:
Othello by William Shakespeare:
Great Expectations by Charles Dickens
1984 by George Orwell
Lord of the Flies by William Golding
Literary Selections from Prentice Hall’s The British Tradition
Optional and suggested for honors sections:
“Sir Gawain and the Green Knight”
Macbeth by William Shakespeare
Pygmalion by Bernard Shaw
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Supplemental Materials:
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Films:
• Monty Python and the Holy Grail –study comparison of Chivalric themes with Sir Gawain and Green Knight and also a
look at modern British humor
• Othello
• Lord of the Flies
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Field trip to theater presentation of Shakespearean nature, when available
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Cultural studies of:
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The English Renaissance & The Romantic Period
–the power of poetry, idealism in character
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19th and 20th century England
-Victorian Culture: the haves vs. the have-nots (social segregation)
-industrialism and revolution
-middle class growth
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World exploration (the impact of and on the British Empire)
-why England was a world power in literature
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The Modern and Post-WWII periods
-the effects of social and economic influences
-political leverage in modern social systems
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Major Assessments:
• 2 major exams throughout the semester, each including:
• An assessment of key literary terms and ideas, reading assessment based on prior class reading;
• grammar assessment based on lessons taught;
• a vocabulary assessment of words from prior class reading;
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1 major Response to Literature essay
• 7-8 page analysis of a theme and its progression through the three stages of Great Expectations
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1 major Response to Literature essay (with attached rubric):
Students will produce a major response to literature essay for Animal Farm
-analysis essay will demonstrate student knowledge and application of allegory and satire using main themes of novel
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1 major Creative Response to British Literature (with attached rubric)
• Students will produce a tragic narrative based on the elements of tragedy learned in Othello,
• Students will demonstrate knowledge, application, and synthesis of tragedy, basic story elements, and writing craft
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Great Expectations Victorian culture research paper (with attached rubric):
• Through the study of a British author students will research British culture in the past and present.
**The Pennsylvania Holistic Scoring Guide is also attached to this document for teacher use in all writing assignments.
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Performance Standards: (taken from NCEE’s New Standards Performance Standards)
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E1a: Reads 25 Books
• Students work on this standard by reading 10 books throughout the semester. Five texts are read with the course work.
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E1b: Reading Comprehension within Genres
• Students work on mastery of this standard during the semester by:
• Making and supporting warranted and responsible assertions about the text;
• Supporting assertions with elaborated and convincing evidence;
• Drawing the texts together to compare and contrast themes, characters, and ideas;
• Making well-developed connections
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E2c: Creative Writing
• Students produce a fictional narrative account that:
• Engages the reader by establishing a context, creating a point of view, and otherwise develops reader interest
• Established a situation, plot, point of view, setting, and conflict
• Creates an organizing structure
• Includes sensory details and concrete language to develop plot and character
• Excludes extraneous details and inconsistencies
• Develops complex characters
• Uses a range of appropriate strategies, such as dialogue, tension or suspense, naming, pacing, and specific
narrative action, e.g., movement, gestures, expressions
• Provides a sense of closure to the writing
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E2b: Response to Literature Essay Writing
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Advances a judgment
• Supports judgment with references to the text(s)
• Demonstrates understanding of the literature in study
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Anticipates and answers a reader’s questions
Recognizes possible ambiguities in literature
Provides a sense of closure
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E2a: Report Writing
• Includes an engaging beginning
• Develops a controlling idea that conveys a perspective on a subject
• Crates an appropriate organizing structure
• Includes appropriate facts and details
• Excludes extraneous and inappropriate information
• Uses a range of appropriate strategies, such as providing facts and details, describing or analyzing the subject; narrating
a relevant anecdote; comparing and contrasting, naming, explaining, and demonstrating claims or assertions
• Provides a sense of closure
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E4a: Use of Grammar in Writing
• Demonstrates an understanding of the rules of the English language
• Demonstrates control of:
• Grammar
• Paragraph structure
• Punctuation
• Sentence construction
• Spelling
• Usage
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E4b: Revises Written Work
• Adds or deletes details;
• Adds or deletes explanations;
• Clarifies difficult passages;
• Rearranges words, sentences, and paragraphs to improve clarity;
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Sharpens the focus
Reconsiders organizational structure
Rethinks and/or rewrites the piece in light of different audiences and purposes
Pennsylvania State Standards:
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1.1.11 B Analyze the structure of informational materials explaining how authors used these to achieve their purposes
1.1.11 C Use knowledge of root words and words from literary works to recognize and understand the meaning of new words
during reading.
1.1.11 D Identify, describe, evaluate, and synthesize the essential ideas in text.
1.1.11 E Establish a reading vocabulary by identifying and correctly using new words acquired through the study of their
relationships to other words. Use a dictionary or related reference.
1.1.11 G Demonstrate after reading understanding and interpretation of both fiction and nonfiction text
1.1.11 H Demonstrates fluency and comprehension in reading.
1.2.11 B Use and understand a variety of media and evaluate the quality of material produced.
1.2.11 C Produce work in at least one literary genre that follows the conventions of that genre.
1.3.11A Reads and understands works of literature.
1.3.11B Analyzes the relationships, uses and effectiveness of literary elements used by one or more authors in similar genres
including characterization, setting, plot, theme, point of view, tone and style.
1.3.11C Analyze the effectiveness, in terms of literary quality, of the author’s use of literary devices
1.4.11 B Write complex informational pieces
1.4.11 C Write persuasive pieces
1.5.11A Writes with a sharp, distinct focus
1.5.11B Writes using well-developed content appropriate for the topic.
1.5.11C Writes with controlled organization
1.5.11D Writes with a command of the stylistic aspects of composition.
1.5.11E Revises writing to improve style, word choice, sentence variety and subtlety of meaning after rethinking how
questions of purpose, audience and genre have been addressed.
1.5.11F Edits writing using the conventions of language.
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1.6.11 A Listen to others
1.6.11 C Speak using skills appropriate to formal speech situations
1.6.11D Contributes to discussions.
1.6.11E Participates in small and large group discussions and presentations.
1.6.11 F Use media for learning purposes.
1.8.11 A Select and refine a topic for research.
1.8.11 B Locate information using appropriate sources and strategies.
1.8.11 C Organize, summarize, and present the main ideas from research.
Grammar Topics:
British Literature will reinforce the mastery of research and critical literary analysis in writing and presentation.
Lessons will include:
• Purpose, style, and tone of writing
• Selecting and refining and developing arguments for topics
• Classification of information
• Writing structures
• Sentence boundaries
• Improving writing style using descriptive writing
• Mastery of usage, including participles, gerunds, and complex prepositional phrases
PSSA Exam Items Addressed:
Through completing this course, students will be preparing themselves for the upcoming PSSA exam by doing the following:
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Understanding and interpreting fictional texts
Analyzing the relationships and effectiveness of literary devices
Analyzing main ideas and supporting details of texts in class
Analyzing authors’ mood and tone
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Supporting a judgment with evidence from the text
Responding to works of literature (through both formal writing and informal discussion)
SAT Exam Items Addressed:
Through completing this course, students will be preparing themselves for the upcoming SAT exam by doing the following:
• Students will learn two new words every day from vocabulary in the reading
• Critical reading done in class will assist students in longer and more detailed reading comprehension section
• Literature read will help students with critical reading sections.
Helpful Websites for Teachers of British Literature:
General Shakespeare Websites:
• Comprehensive lesson plan archive: http://www.folger.edu/education/getarchive.cfm
• PBS lessons on Shakespeare: http://www.pbs.org/shakespeare/educators/lessonplans.html
• Excellent teaching links: http://www.teachersfirst.com/shakespr.shtml
• Huge collection of resources: http://webtech.kennesaw.edu/jcheek3/shakespeare.htm
• Extensive Shakespeare links: http://shakespeare.palomar.edu/educational.htm
• Shakespeare resources: http://www.kusd.edu/employees/lessons/shlessons/shakespeare.html
• Links to lessons on Shakespeare’s plays: http://www.shakespearehelp.com/index.htm
• Links to lessons on Shakespeare’s plays: http://shakespeare.about.com/cs/teacherguides2/
Othello Websites:
• Extensive Othello links: http://www.shakespearehelp.com/lear/main.htm
• Webquest: http://www.pbs.org/shakespeare/educators/technology/lessonplan.html
Great Expectations Websites:
• http://www.webenglishteacher.com/dickens.html
General Websites:
• Good general literacy links: http://www.readwritethink.org
• Very valuable website on many different topics: http://www.milforded.org/teachers_rooms/highschool/english.asp
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Good general resources on teaching literature: http://www.learner.org/channel/libraries/makingmeaning/
MLA citing: http://www.mla.org/
Common Proofreading Symbols: http://webster.commnet.edu/writing/symbols.htm
Lessons on a multitude of topics, literature and grammar related: http://www.lessonplanspage.com/LAJH.htm
Lesson plan links: http://www.eduhound.com/lessonplan_links.cfm
Links for teachers: http://mciu.org/~spjvweb/tealinks.html
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Response to Literature Rubric
Little attempt made (0-1)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Engaging opening
(E2b substandard
1)
Opening sentence does not
introduce the topic and does
not engage the reader
Makes an
interpretation
(has a thesis)
(E2b substandard
2)
Uses references to
the text to
support thesis
(E2b substandard
3)
Interpretation makes little
effort to show understanding
of the work.
Opening sentence has some
engaging qualities, but does
not provide the reader with a
clear idea of the topic.
Interpretation shows some
failure to understand the
work
Opening sentence is
engaging and provides the
reader with a clear idea of
the topic
Interpretation demonstrates
an understanding of the work
and shows higher level
thinking
Uses very little quotes and/or
direct references to the text
Uses quotes and references
to the text, but does not
relate them to the judgment
being made. Quotes are not
properly documented.
Uses quotes and references
to the text that relate directly
to the judgment being made,
and documents them
correctly.
Opening sentence is very
engaging and provides a
very clear idea of the
topic.
Interpretation goes above
and beyond showing
comprehension and makes
mature judgments and
connections.
Uses many quotes and
references to the text that
are both documented
correctly and integrated
well into the paper.
Demonstrates
understanding of
the text (E2b,
substandard 4)
Writes with an
intended
audience in mind
(E2b,
substandard 5
and 6)
Provides a sense
of closure
(E2b substandard
7)
Exhibits very little
understanding of the text.
Some understanding of the
text is evident, but has some
errors in comprehension and
logic.
Takes into account the
intended audience, but still
possesses some unclear
ideas.
Exhibits understanding of
the text.
Exhibits a very high and
mature understanding of
the text.
Takes into account the
intended audience in a way
that makes writing clear and
to the point.
Takes into account the
intended audience in way
that the writing’s clarity is
flawless.
Closing paragraph restates
the main points of the essay
and has a “clincher” last
sentence.
Closing sums up all main
points very neatly and
ends with a HUGE
BANG!!
Essay has 2-3 mechanics
errors.
Essay has NO mechanics
errors.
Standard
Mechanics (E4a)
Does not take into account
any intended audience in
writing
Closing paragraph
introduces new ideas and/or
does not restate the thesis;
closing does not have a
“clincher” last sentence.
Essay has more than 7
mechanics errors
Total: ___________/35
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Closing paragraph does not
restate the main points of the
essay enough; closing has
somewhat of a “clincher”
last sentence.
Essay has 4-6 mechanics
errors.
x2= _______________/70
Percentage: _____________%
COMMENTS
Letter Grade: _______________
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Creative Response to British Literature Rubric
Substandard
Engages the reader
(E2c, substandard
1)
Establishes a
situation, plot,
POV, setting, and
conflict (E2c,
substandard 2)
Organizing
structure (E2c,
substandard 3q)
Includes sensory
details and
concrete language
(E2c, substandard
4)
Develops complex
characters (E2c,
substandard 6)
Uses a range of
appropriate
strategies (E2c,
substandard 7)
Sense of closure
(E2f, substandard
6)
Grammar
Needs Major Revision (0-1)
First sentence makes some
effort to introduce the story,
but lacks engagement
Makes a minimal effort to
include one or two of the
elements, but lacks attention
to all
Needs Some Revision (2-3)
First sentence is engaging,
but does not relate well to the
narrative.
Makes an attempt to include
some of the necessary
elements, but not all
Meets Standard (4)
First sentence is engaging and
introduces the overall theme
of the narrative
Establishes a situation, plot,
point of view, setting, and
conflict
Exceeds Standard (5)
First sentence is extremely
engaging and introduces
the narrative
Goes into great detail in
establishing a situation,
plot, point of view, and
conflict
Story is choppy, has little
attention to flow, and
paragraph structure is
scattered and weak.
Makes a minimal attempt to
include sensory details and
concrete language, but overall
attempt is lacking in effort.
Story has some structure, but
lacks an overall sense of flow
Story has an organizing
structure that is appropriate
for topic and audience
Makes an attempt to use some
sensory details and concrete
language, but story lacks
enough details to keep reader
interest
Characters lack enough
development to make their
part in the story clear
Uses some purposeful writing
strategies, but not enough to
create a lasting effect
Uses enough sensory details
and concrete language to lend
to an interesting story
Story has a flawless
organizing structure that is
appropriate for topic and
audience.
Uses sensory details and
concrete language
throughout the narrative
that lends to a riveting
story
Features original and
compelling characters
Includes a conclusion, but
one story still seems slightly
unfinished
3-5 major grammar errors
Conclusion gives the story a
sense of completeness
Characters are weakly
developed and their part in
the story is very unclear
Uses very few purposeful
strategies, not enough to
make an effect
Conclusion is very weak and
the story seems to lack an
ending.
Grammar errors are so
numerous that comprehension
is affected
Total Points Earned: ________/40
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x5 = ____________/200
Develops characters in a way
that makes their part in the
story clear
Uses a variety of writing
strategies
1-2 major grammar errors
Comments
Effectively uses writing
strategies to enhance
narrative
Conclusion leaves the
reader extremely satisfied
and wanting to read more
No errors
Percentage: _________________
Letter Grade: ______________
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British Author Report Rubric
Standard
Little Attempt Made (0-1)
Needs Remediation (2-3)
Meets Standard (4)
Exceeds Standard (5)
Develops a strong
thesis (E2a,
substandard 2)
Organizing
structure (E2a,
substandard 3)
Thesis does not give a strong
perspective on a subject
Thesis statement is not developed
enough to be supported
Thesis statement is developed
and clearly supported
Thesis statement is well
developed and supported.
Little effort is put into
developing paragraphs
Effort is made to write in
paragraph form, but sentences are
scattered and transitions are weak
Paragraph structure is well
developed to include topic
sentences and some transitions.
Includes
appropriate facts
and details (E2a,
substandard 4)
Excludes
extraneous and
inappropriate
information (E2a,
substandard 5)
Provides a sense of
closure (E2a,
substandard 7)
Bibliography
Includes very little in terms of
evidence of historical Macbeth
Includes some evidence that
supports thesis, but more could
be found
Includes an adequate amount of
evidence to support thesis
Paragraph structure is near
perfectly clear, including strong
transitions, topic sentences for
each paragraph, and clear
organization within each
paragraph
Includes a large body of
evidence, illustrating strong
research skills, to support thesis
Includes a large amount of
information that is unrelated to
thesis
Some information does not
support thesis
Very little information is
included that does not support
thesis
No information is included that
does not support the thesis
No separate concluding
paragraph is evident
Closing paragraph does not sum
up all main points of the essay
concisely
Closing paragraph restates the
main points of the essay in an
organized fashion
Closing paragraph restates the
main points of the essay and
ends with a “clincher”
Includes evidence from 0-1
resources
Direct Quotes (and
citations)
Grammar (E4a)
Does not include any direct
quotes
Includes evidence from 2 or 3
resources, with some errors in
MLA documentation
Includes 2-3 direct quotes, but
has errors in citation
Includes evidence from 4
resources, very few errors in
MLA documentation
Includes 3-5 direct quotes with
proper citation
Includes evidence from more
than 4 resources, with no errors
in MLA documentation.
Includes 6 or more direct quotes
with proper citation
Has 6-10 grammar mistakes
Has 3-5 grammar mistakes
Has only 1-2 grammar mistakes
Has more than 10 grammar
mistakes
Total: ___________/40
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x3= _______________/120
Percentage: _____________%
Comments
Letter Grade: _______________
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Student name: ______________________________
Writing response assessment for 1984
British Literature
1
2
3
4
5
Introduction is clear and defines topic
Introduction uses formal language
Writer transitions smoothly into supporting details
Details are relevant and clearly support the thesis
There are enough details to convincingly
support the thesis
Details transition smoothly to a
conclusion statement
Conclusion statement explains purpose and
ties information back to the thesis
Formal tone is maintained throughout analysis
Total: ___________ / 40
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Pennsylvania Writing Assessment Holistic Scoring Guide (for alternate assessments)
6
5
4
3
2
1
Focus
sharp, distinct focus
clear focus
adequate focus
vague focus
confused focus
absence of focus
Content
Substantive, specific
and/ or illustrative
content; sophisticated
ideas that are
particularly well
developed
specific and
illustrative content
sufficient content
content limited to a
listing, repetition or
mere sequence of
ideas
superficial content
absence of relevant
content
inconsistent
organization
confused
organization
absence of
organization
Organization obviously controlled and/
or subtle organization
logical and appropriate appropriate
organization
organization
Style
writer’s choice apparent in precision and variety
tone, sentence structure
in sentence structure
and word choice
and word choice
some precision and
variety in sentence
structure and word
choice
limited sentence
variety and word
choice
Lack of sentence and no apparent control
word choice variety over sentence structure
and word choice
Conventions
few mechanical and
usage errors
mechanical and usage
errors not severe
enough to interfere
significantly with the
writer’s purpose
repeated weaknesses
in mechanics and
usage
mechanical and
usage errors that
seriously interfere
with the writer’s
purpose
some mechanical and
usage errors
mechanical and usage
error so severe that
writer’s ideas are
difficult, if not
impossible, to understand
Nonscorable
Is illegible i.e.; includes so many undecipherable words that
no sense can be made of the response
Focus
Demonstrates an awareness of
audience and task.
Establishes and maintains a
clear purpose.
Sustains single point of view.
Exhibits clarity of ideas.
Content
Information and details are
specific to topic.
Information and details are
relevant to focus.
Ideas are fully developed.
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Is incoherent, i.e.: words are legible but syntax is so
garbled that the report makes no sense
Organization
Style
Logical order of sequence is
maintained. Paragraphs deal with
one subject. Logical transitions
are made within sentences
between and paragraphs.
Introduction and conclusion are
evident.
Precise language.
Effective word choice.
Voice, tone originality of
language.
Variety of sentence structures,
types and lengths.
Conventions
Mechanics: spelling,
capitalization, punctuation.
Usage (e.g. pronoun
references, subject-verb
agreement).
Sentence completeness.
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Unit of Study
Great Expectations
All semester (at least two days
each week)
Sir Gawain and the Green
Knight (HONORS option)
1 week
Shakespeare:
Othello
4 weeks
1984/George Orwell
2 weeks
Lord of the Flies
2 weeks
Major Concepts Covered
British Literature Unit Plan
Skills Mastered
Student Products
Characterization
Theme analysis
Elements of complex plot and
narrative
Use of Dickens’ descriptive
writing techniques
Author purpose
Synthesis of cultural and social
knowledge (Victorian)
Fictional character development
Analytical and expository writing
skills
Use of direct quotes in literary
response
Public speaking
MLA-format report writing
Research and study skills
-knowing when to cite
–citing facts correctly
Lyric poems
Alliteration
Fantasy and romanticism
Arthurian Legend
Poetic analysis
Identifying key events
Understanding legend vs.
historical fact
Elizabethan drama
Figurative and descriptive
language
Iambic pentameter and verse
dialogue
Tragedy and tragic elements
Dramatic irony
Author purpose in writing
Analysis of conflict in modern
social structures and government
Use of subtlety in writing
Allegory and satire
Irony
Public speaking
Creative writing
Literary interpretation
Reading verse script
Analytic and expository writing
Independent reading
Note-taking strategies
MLA text citation
Response to Literature essay—
analysis: how AF is a satirical
allegory
Analysis of conflict in human
sociology and psychology
(civilized vs. beast)
Author purpose in writing
Fear in post WWII writing
(apocalypse)
Analytic and expository writing
Independent reading
Note-taking strategies
Independent reading comp. and
connections
Exam responses
Short essay analysis of general
themes of British Lit
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Effective Teaching Strategies
1) 3 short five paragraph
Response to Literature –based on
three stages of story and theme
development
3) Major Response to Literature
Essay—scaffolded from minor
essays to dicuss author purpose
for literature
4) Victorian historical research
report 2-3 pages
5) Journal responses text to
reader connections
Comic book depicting key
elements of plot development
Timeline of plot events
Journal and discussion of
personal emotions
Reading participation –extra
credit for volunteers
Research gathering and writing
review (online resources)
Pre-writing strategies
Scaffolded series of writing
assignments
7-10 page tragic narrative
Philadelphia Shakespeare
Festival residency -1 week
Dramatic reading of script
Movies and field trip to help
supplement the visual aspects of
drama
In class response essays to
morally challenging questions
Journal
Dramatic poetic reading
Acting out of scenes with
narration
Retelling in modern terms
Supplemental story: Alan
Johnston’s kidnapping
“Shooting an Elephant”
Excerpts from “Why I Write”
Histroy presentation on
Communist Russia’s rise
Notes-taking strategies
Independent reading and
discussion
Psychological explanation of: id, ego, superego
-psychopaths and sociopaths
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Accommodations:
HONORS:
• Increased length and depth of analysis for scaffolded Response to Literature essays.
• Independent brainstorming expectations (less support provided in class by instructor)
• British Author Report:
• Students will deliver a multi-media formal presentation of their author with historical connections to the time
period of British history and culture
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General expectations for levels of text interpretation and quality of writing/presenting will be higher for all assignments
More independent performance and greater depth of group discussions during whole-class time and literature circles
Supplemental reading for Orwell unit: “The Lion and the Unicorn”
“Sir Gawain and the Green Knight” unit on Arthurian legend and the British/European tradition of storytelling
Additional unit on Shakespeare’s sonnets (if time allows)
SPECIAL EDUCATION:
-provide accommodated versions of Great Expectations text and Shakespeare plays
-provide plot overviews of texts to assist in mastery of details (and enable more focus on higher concepts)
-reduced writing length requirements for essays and reports
-accommodated quizzes and exams for learning style strengths
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