1.
a. some modern american poets has
experimented with poetic form
b. richard wilburs poem the beautiful
changes praise’s natures mystery
a. Some modern American poets have experimented with poetic form.
b. Richard Wilbur’s poem “The Beautiful Changes” praises nature’s mystery.
2.
a. when arthur pulled the sword out
of the stone he didnt know he would
became no king
b. trying to help sir kay by getting
him a sword were all arthur had on
his mind
a. When Arthur pulled the sword out of the stone, he didn’t know he would become king. [no deleted]
b. Trying to help Sir Kay by getting him a sword was all Arthur had on his mind.
3.
a. before puling the sword from the stone
arthur were a boy with that act he becomes a
man
b. arthur still has to prove himself by pulling
the sword out of the stone a 2nd time freeing
the sword shows everyone that the throne is his
birthright
a. Before pulling the sword from the stone, Arthur was a boy, but with that act he became a man.
b. Arthur still had to prove himself by pulling the sword out of the stone a second time. Freeing the sword
showed everyone that the throne was his birthright.
4.
a. the musical comedy camelot shows arthur
deciding too create the round table an
organization of knights
b. he thinks there energy will be channeled into
doing write
a. The musical comedy Camelot shows Arthur deciding to create the Round Table, an organization of
knights.
b. He thinks their energy will be channeled into doing right.
5.
a. in the play about king arthur camelot merlin
taught arthur buy turning him into animals
b. by becoming different animals arthur were
able to experience the world in many different
ways ways that a great ruler mite need to no
a. In the play about King Arthur, Camelot, Merlin taught Arthur by turning him into animals.
b. By becoming different animals Arthur was able to experience the world in many different ways, ways that a
great ruler might need to know.
6.
a. amy tan have not planned too became a
Fiction-Writer but she become one anyways
b. her and her mother disagreed, over what Tan
should study, in collage
a. Amy Tan had not planned to become a fiction writer, but she became one anyway.
b. She and her mother disagreed over what Tan should study in college. [commas deleted]
7.
a. o henrys reel name were william sydney
porter
b. some people say he done robbed a bank
in texas
a. O. Henry’s real name was William Sydney Porter.
b. Some people say he robbed a bank in Texas. [done deleted]
8.
a. their is some basic diffrences among
written language and the visual language
of film
b. because of the nature of visaul
language a abstract concept like loyalty or
dishonor are often easier too specify in
words
a. There are some basic differences between written language and the visual language of film.
b. Because of the nature of visual language, an abstract concept like loyalty or dishonor is often
easier to specify in words.
9.
a. the first public theater in england were built
in 1576 it was built by james burbage
b. the globe the most fameous of the public
theaters was owned by Shakespeares
theaticral company
a. The first public theater in England was built in 1576 by James Burbage. [sentence revised]
b. The Globe, the most famous of the public theaters, was owned by Shakespeare’s theatrical company.
10.
a. blank verse or unrhymed iambic
pentameter a form of poetry that comes close
too imitating the natural rhythm’s of english
speech
b. many of Shakespeares plays is wrote in
blank verse
a. Blank verse, or unrhymed iambic pentameter, is a form of poetry that comes close to imitating
the natural rhythms of English speech.
b. Many of Shakespeare’s plays are written in blank verse.
9.
a. mark twains father twains real name was samuel langhorne clemens were a unpractical businessman
b. look it up in the index an alphabetical listing of a books contents at the back of this volumne
a. Mark Twain’s father (Twain’s real name was Samuel Langhorne Clemens) was an impractical
businessman.
b. Look it up in the index (an alphabetical listing of a book’s contents) at the back of this volume.
10.
a. sometimes i were irritated that my Grandmother made us conformed too rigid rules
b. now im aware of how lucky ive been too have family members that shows theyre concern
a. Sometimes I was irritated that my grandmother made us conform to rigid rules.
b. Now I’m aware of how lucky I’ve been to have family members who show their concern.