Casa Frameworks: Technology-Infused Writing • MiWLA ’
05
Progression of Writing Projects
SINGLE-DRAFT
~ Más o menos
? En mi opinión
? Skit: En la tienda
? Monsters, Inc.
? Exaggerated
Post Cards
? Nemo
MULTI-DRAFT
~ Rewrites +…
? Dr. Moda
? Casa de mis sueños
? JoannaVille
Elements of Writing Projects
SINGLE-DRAFT
? Engaging topics –
Expand on unit theme
? Cognate support
? Pointers to recycled
vocabulary
? Opportunities to stretch
? Add ons
? Connectors
? Focus Correction Areas
? John Collins
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MULTI-DRAFT
? Engaging topics –
Expand on unit theme
? Cognate support
? Pointers to recycled vocabulary
? Opportunities to stretch
? Authentic websites
? Genie words
? Focus Correction Areas
? Correction codes / Error lists
? More elaborate rubrics
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SKIT GRADES
Grading rubric applies only to second performance!
?+
[11/10]
?
[10/10]
Speech is fluid
(sounds natural)
Pronunciation
supports
comprehension
(we understand
what you mean)
Skit includes all
required
elements
Skit features
especially
creative use
of “recycled”
language
?
?
?
?
?
?
?
?[7/10]
Speech is fluid
(sounds natural)
Pronunciation
supports
comprehension
(we understand
what you mean)
Skit includes all
required elements
?
?
?
Speech is
halting
(sounds like
reading)
Pronunciation
supports
comprehension
(we understand
what you mean)
Skit includes all
required
elements
½ credit
[5/10]
?
?
After 2nd
attempt,
problems still
remain that
affect
understanding
(e.g. sentences
in incorrect
order,
laughing,
severe
pronunciation
issues, etc.)
Skit includes all
required
elements
Monsters Rubric
FCAs without the term
10
Composition includes at least 5 sentences. Sentences include DIVERSE vocabulary
that accurately describes the character. Composition may include a FEW errors in
adjective agreement OR a FEW errors in using le gusta sentences.
8
Composition includes at least 5 sentences. Sentences include DIVERSE vocabulary
that accurately describes the character. Composition may include a FEW errors in
adjective agreement AND a FEW errors in using le gusta sentences.
6
Composition includes at least 5 sentences. Sentences include MOSTLY BOOK
vocabulary that accurately describes the character. Composition may include a
FEW errors in adjective agreement OR a FEW errors in using le gusta sentences.
4
Composition includes at least 5 sentences. Sentences include MOSTLY BOOK
vocabulary that accurately describes the character. Composition may include a
FEW errors in adjective agreement AND a FEW errors in using le gusta sentences.
2
Composition includes at least 5 sentences. Sentences include MOSTLY BOOK
vocabulary that accurately describes the character. Composition may include MANY
errors in adjective agreement AND MANY errors in using le gusta sentences.
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Writing Codes
“Oh, I spelled it wrong”
Vb
Verbe
Incorrect form of the verb
G
Grammaire
Incorrect form of the word
Voc
Vocabulaire
Incorrect word choice
Or
Orthographe
Incorrect spelling
^
(Ça manque
quelque chose)
Fran-glais
Missing word
Fake French ~ Not quite right
Dream House Rubric
3 pts
2 pts
1 pt
Content
Assignment includes all required
information. Writing is varied and
includes rich expressions. Vocabulary
used extends well beyond basic
classroom description, including diverse
adjectives (i.e. from poem sheet).
Assignment includes all required
information. Writing is varied.
Vocabulary used extends somewhat
beyond basic classroom description,
including a few new adjectives (i.e.
from poem sheet).
Assignment includes all required
information. Writing is varied.
Vocabulary used is primarily drawn
from basic classroom description, may
include a few new adjectives (i.e. from
poem sheet).
FCA Accuracy
No significant errors in FCAs.
One or two errors in FCAs; mistakes
do not prevent reader from
understanding main ideas.
Three or four errors in FCAs; mistakes
do not prevent reader from
understanding main ideas.
Writing is understandable but may have
a few missed prepositions or mistakes
with articles.
Writing is understandable but may be
missing a few prepositions, articles
and/or minor grammatical errors;
mistakes in non-key words.
Writing is understandable but may be
missing a few prepositions, articles
and/or have substantial grammatical
errors (verb conjugation).
Focus Correction
Areas:
1. ser vs. estar
2. Forms of verbs
3. Forms of
adjectives
General Accuracy
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