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What is an unreliable narrator?
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An unreliable narrator is one of the most powerful tools available to a writer. His unreliability
might be obvious to the reader throughout, it might be revealed gradually, or it might come as a
revelation that provides a major plot twist.
What is an unreliable narrator?
It is a character who tells the reader a story that cannot be taken at face value. This may be
because the point of view character is insane, lying, deluded or for any number of other reasons.
The phrase “unreliable narrator” was first used by the literary critic Wayne Booth in the early
1960s. The technique has been around as long as literature itself has been though. In fact,
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prehistoric humans probably sat around fires knowingly listening to one hunter who always
exaggerated his feats.
The writer and the narrator in fiction are not the same person of course, so what does the writer
stand to gain from using a misleading narrator to tell a story? What is the purpose of an
untruthful narrator in fiction? And how can the writer ensure that the reader understands that
the narrator is not to believed?
Sometimes the narrator is unreliable by nature. In other words, some stories are told by narrators
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who are such terrible people that they cannot tell their stories objectively. In general, even people
who commit the worst crimes justify their actions to themselves. A classic example is the
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murderous narrator of the Edgar Allan Poe story “The Telltale Heart”.
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one of the most famous is Vladimir Nabakov’s Humbert Humbert, a middle-aged man
with a predilection for underaged girls or “nymphets” (as he calls them). In Lolita, Nabakov
2signals Humbert’s unreliability to the reader in a number of ways such as his outrageous claims,
his endless justifications for shocking acts and his contempt for others. Alex from A Clockwork
Orange is another example of a reprehensible character sharing his unreliable narrative with the
reader.
Dishonest narrators can also be used to great effect in stories of crime and mystery. It can be
difficult to discuss these types of narrators without spoiling the story, but both Agatha Christie’s
classic novel The Murder of Roger Ackroyd and the recent Gillian Flynn best seller Gone Girl
employ unreliable narrators whose lack of trustworthiness is crucial to the construction of both
novels’ mystery. Often in books like these the reader starts out trusting the narrator and only as
the story goes on realises that something is amiss.
This type of narrator is not always deliberately deceptive. Sometimes, a narrator is unreliable due
to youth or naïveté. The young autistic narrator of The Curious Incident of the Dog in the NightTime by Mark Haddon or the five-year-old narrator of Emma Donoghue’s Room are simply
reporting the world as they understand it. These books rely on readers to make inferences based
on clues given by narrators who do not always accurately interpret events.
The unreliable narrator is particularly useful
for horror and supernatural fiction writers
who want readers to question the line between
fantasy and reality. The classic 19th century tale
The Yellow Wallpaper is one famous example of
this type of narrator. A more modern example is
Yann Martel’s novel The Life of Pi in which
readers wonder increasingly about the truth of
events described by the narrator.
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There is sub type of narrator that differs from those listed above. This narrator is unreliable due
to having incomplete or incorrect information. For example, the narrator of Rebecca by Daphne
du Maurier initially misunderstands nearly everything she learns about her new husband’s dead
wife, and therefore, the reader does as well.
One particularly skilfull use of the unreliable narrator that combines several of the above types is
Lionel Shriver’s We Need to Talk About Kevin. Besides withholding information from the reader,
the narrator’s report of events is ambiguous. Unlike some of the unreliable narrators listed above,
Shriver leaves much of the judgement up to the reader. Is Eva a bad mother, is Kevin a bad child or
are both of these things true? The book is effective with any of these readings applied.
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There are dangers in using this type of narrator.
Readers do not always understand that a
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is not the final voice of truth and
authority. They may even confuse the narrator
2with the author. The unreliable narrator is most
obvious in mystery plots where the narrator’s
unreliability is generally revealed as part of the
resolution. In other cases, it’s important to plant
clues along the way to ensure that the reader
understands and perceives the situation in a way
the writer does not.
How can a writer do this? There are a number of ways. One is by showing the reactions of other
characters. This can work for other types of information as well. The narrator may react in a way
that is clearly inappropriate, and the reader can realise this when the narrator does not. Another
is the nature of the situations or characters themselves. From the moment we learn that Humbert
Humbert is courting Lolita’s mother in order to get closer to the teenage daughter, we understand
that there is something wrong with our narrator.
Sometimes, the unreliability of the narrator is only gradually revealed. The reader may in fact
trust the narrator through much of the novel. With this approach, it’s important to layer in clues
throughout the first part of the novel without making them obvious. This ensures that in looking
back, the reader does not feel cheated by the switch.
Who are some of your favourite unreliable narrators in fiction, and how have you used the
unreliable narrator in your own writing?
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