Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Unit Length: 7 weeks Unit/Chapter Title: Unit 4: Modernism Course/Grade: English II-World Literature Interdisciplinary Connection: Technology Unit Overview: Modernism is an aesthetic movement (1890-1945) coupled with a historical time period recording a radical break with the past and alienation from society. The literature of this period is orderly, logical and fact-based produced by authors who are detached and unemotional in their writing. Students will explore alienation and isolation through an analytical writing piece and a Socratic seminar. They will compose an original poem in response to a work of art and they will write an argumentative research paper that will also connect with a career exploration exercise. New Jersey Student Learning Standards Reading: NJSLSA.R1 Read closely to determine what the text says explicitly and to make logical inferences and relevant connections from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to support conclusions drawn from the text. NJSLSA.R2 Determine central ideas or themes of a text and analyze their development; summarize the key supporting details and ideas. NJSLSA.R3 Analyze how and why individuals, events, and ideas develop and interact over the course of a text. B. Use various types of phrases (noun, verb, adjectival, adverbial, participial, prepositional, absolute) and clauses (independent, dependent; noun, relative, adverbial) to convey specific meanings and add variety and interest to writing or presentations. NJSLSA.R4. Interpret words and phrases as they are used in a text, including determining technical, connotative, and figurative (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 meanings, and analyze how specific word choices shape meaning or tone. NJSLSA.R5. Analyze the structure of texts, including how specific sentences, paragraphs, and larger portions of the text (e.g., a section, chapter, scene, or stanza) relate to each other and the whole. NJSLSA.R6. Assess how point of view or purpose shapes the content and style of a text. NJSLSA.R7. Integrate and evaluate content presented in diverse media and formats, including visually and quantitatively, as well as in words. NJSLSA.R8. Delineate and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, including the validity of the reasoning as well as the relevance and sufficiency of the evidence. NJSLSA.R9 Analyze and reflect on how two or more texts address similar themes or topics in order to build knowledge or to compare the approaches the authors take. NJSLSA.R10 Read and comprehend complex literary and informational texts independently and proficiently with scaffolding as needed. Writing: NJSLSA.W1 Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence. NJSLSA. W2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas and information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and analysis of content. NJSLSA.W3 Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences. NJSLSA.W4 Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 NJSLSA.W5 Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. NJSLSA.W6 Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing and to interact and collaborate with others. NJSLSA.W7 Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects, utilizing an inquiry-based research process, based on focused questions, demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation. NJSLSA.W8 Gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources, assess the credibility and accuracy of each source, and integrate the information while avoiding plagiarism. NJSLSA.W9 Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research. NJSLSA.W10 Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes, and audiences. Speaking and Listening: NJSLSA.SL1. Prepare for and participate effectively in a range of conversations and collaborations with diverse partners, building on others’ ideas and expressing their own clearly and persuasively. NJSLSA.SL2. Integrate and evaluate information presented in diverse media and formats, including visually, quantitatively, and orally. NJSLSA.SL3. Evaluate a speaker’s point of view, reasoning, and use of evidence and rhetoric. NJSLSA.SL4. Present information, findings, and supporting evidence such that listeners can follow the line of reasoning and the organization, development, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. NJSLSA.SL5. Make strategic use of digital media and visual displays of data to express information and enhance understanding of presentations. (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 NJSLSA.SL6. Adapt speech to a variety of contexts and communicative tasks, demonstrating command of formal English when indicated or appropriate. Language: NJSLSA.L1. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking. NJSLSA.L2. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing. NJSLSA L3. Apply knowledge of language to understand how language functions in different contexts, to make effective choices for meaning or style, and to comprehend more fully when reading or listening. NJSLSA L4. Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning words and phrases by using context clues, analyzing meaningful word parts, and consulting general and specialized reference materials, as appropriate. NJSLSA L5. Demonstrate understanding of word relationships and nuances in word meanings. NJSLSA L6. Acquire and use accurately a range of general academic and domain-specific words and phrases sufficient for reading, writing, speaking, and listening at the college and career readiness level; demonstrate independence in gathering vocabulary knowledge when encountering an unknown term important to comprehension or expression. 21st Century Life and Careers Standards CRP 1 - Act as a responsible and contributing citizen and employee. CRP 2 - Apply appropriate academic and technical skills. (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 CRP 4- Communicate clearly and effectively and with reason. CRP 6 -Demonstrate creativity and innovation. CRP 8 - Utilize critical thinking to make sense of problems and persevere in solving them. CRP 11 - Use technology to enhance productivity. Interdisciplinary Connections : Technology 8.1.12.F.1: Select and use specialized databases for advanced research to solve realworld problems. Essential Questions 1. To what extent do mood and tone reveal an author's style and voice? 2. How is research done properly? 3. What is effective writing? (Revised 2016) Enduring Understandings 1. An author's style and voice are revealed through diction, syntax, imagery, mood, and tone. 2. Researchers gather and assess information, interpret meaning, and articulate findings. 3. Effective writing is a process requiring patience, discipline, and evaluation, with each revision seeking to improve focus, organization, clarity, and detail. Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Student Learning Objectives/ Progress Indicators (What students should know and be able to do?) READING READING Progress Indicators: Students will be able to: RL10.2: Determine a theme or central idea of a text and analyze in detail its development over the course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by specific details, and provide an objective summary of the text. • Determine and analyze multiple themes in a text and explain how they develop and interact with each other • Compare the theme of a text to a current event or personal topic RL 10.3: Analyze how complex characters (e.g., those with multiple or conflicting motivations) develop over the course of a text, interact with other characters, and advance the plot or develop the theme. • Create a concise retelling of a text using important facts and details. RL.10.6 Analyze a particular point of view or cultural experience reflected in a work of literature from outside the United States, drawing on a wide reading of world literature. RL.10.10: • Identify the plot elements in a story and analyze how the author’s choices develop them • Organize concrete evidence and/or supporting textual details to support a thesis statement • Identify various types of figurative language in a story and determine an author uses them to create meaning By the end of grade 10, read and comprehend literature, including • Infer meaning from a variety of text types stories, dramas, and poems, at the high end of the grades 9-10 text • Apply a variety of reading skills to comprehend texts (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 proficiently and independently at grade level complexity band independently and proficiently. WRITING WRITING Progress Indicators: Students will be able to: W.10.4: • Use proper grammar, punctuation, spelling and word usage • Organize writing to ensure effective communication Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. W.10.5: Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, trying a new approach, or consulting a style manual (such as MLA or APA Style), focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience. W.10.6: Use technology, including the Internet, to produce, share, and update writing products, taking advantage of technology’s capacity to link to other information and to display information flexibly and dynamically W.10.7: (Revised 2016) • Write and edit work that conforms to MLA format • Develop appropriate transitions to organize paragraphs and ensure cohesion in writing • Create texts for a variety of audiences and purposes • Write and edit work so that it conforms to the guidelines in the MLA handbook • Utilize technology tools to produce, edit, and publish writing • Plan essay responses by using brainstorming and various graphic organizers for planning • Participate in peer reviews • Conference with teacher Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects to answer a question (including a self-generated question) or solve a problem; narrow or broaden the inquiry when appropriate; synthesize multiple sources on the subject, demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation. • Revise/edit written responses throughout the unit • Write short and longer pieces for a variety of purposes • Reflect on own learning • Create a writing portfolio to be shared with potential employers or colleges • Combine various sources on a subject to show evidence of understanding. • Construct research projects to answer various types of questions. SPEAKING AND LISTENING SPEAKING AND LISTENING Progress Indicators: Students will be able to: SL.10.4: Present information, findings and supporting evidence clearly, concisely, and logically. The content, organization, development, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. • Introduce information and evidence clearly and concisely • Address multiple points-of-view when presenting information • Develop oral arguments that are appropriate for purpose, task, and audience SL.10.5: Make strategic use of digital media (e.g., textual, graphical, audio, • Use digital media strategically in presentations for increased visual, and interactive elements) in presentations to enhance understanding and interest findings, reasoning, and evidence and to add interest. LANGUAGE (Revised 2016) LANGUAGE Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Progress Indicators: Students will be able to : L.10.1: Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking. • • Use proper grammar when writing and speaking Demonstrate that usage can change over time • Demonstrate knowledge of when to capitalize, where to punctuate and how to spell words correctly L.10.2 Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing. Instructional Strategies Modifications/Extensions Assessments Resources/Technology (How will the students reach the learning targets?) (How will I differentiate?) (How will the students demonstrate mastery?) (What resources and materials will students need?) Reading: Scaffolds: Formative Assessments: Texts: • • • • • Leveled reading materials • Graphic organizer • Build background knowledge • • • • Prentice Hall Literature World Masterpieces: See Appendix D for selected readings Close reading of texts Take notes while reading Reread for comprehension Infer meaning from text (Revised 2016) Essays Teacher observation Quizzes/tests Journals “Cyrano deBergerac”-Edmond Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 • Incorporate background knowledge into the reading • Ask metacognitive questions while reading • Think. Pair, Share • Turn and Talk • Gallery Walk • Literature Circles • Highlighted Reading Continuum • Graphic Organizers • Explicit teaching of basic academic vocabulary • Opportunities to work with partners or small groups • Provide opportunities to respond in multiple formats Extensions: • Advanced organizers • Independent studies • Mentoring other students • Group discussions • Checks for understanding ( exit tickets, choral & individual responses • Response to Literature • Student Reflection • Student Portfolios Performance Tasks: Please see Appendix A Rostand (play) online Socratic Seminar: Please see Appendix B www.pinkmonkey.com Great Expectations-Charles Dickens (novel) Grapes of Wrath-John Steinbeck (novel) Websites: www.scribd.com www.njdoe.gov Summative Assessment: Please see Appendix C/ www.dictionary.com NJDOE Unit 4 Assessment www.readwritethink.org • Student Portfolios Ancillary Materials: Laptops Eno Board/Smart Board/Star Board Internet Student Portfolios (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Rubrics Writing: • • • • • • • • Brainstorming Pre-writing Conference Revise/edit Peer feedback Summarizing Use of Writing exemplars Use of graphic organizers Scaffolds: Formative Assessments: Texts: • • • • • • • • • • • • • Prentice Hall Literature World Masterpieces: See Appendix D for selected readings • Pre-teaching the rubric Word banks Making connections Graphic organizers Transitional words list Compositional risks list Extensions: • • • Advanced organizers Independent studies Mentoring other students Essays Journals Do now Entrance/exit tickets Evaluation of Cornell notes Teacher observation Student Reflection Student Writing Portfolio Performance Tasks: Please see Appendix A Socratic Seminar: Please see Appendix B Summative Assessment: Please see Appendix C/ (Revised 2016) “Cyrano deBergerac”-Edmond Rostand (play) online Great Expectations-Charles Dickens (novel) Grapes of Wrath-John Steinbeck (novel) Websites: www.scribd.com www.pinkmonkey.com www.njdoe.gov NJDOE Unit 4 Assessment www.dictionary.com • Student Portfolios www.readwritethink.org Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Ancillary Materials: Laptops Eno Board/Smart Board/Star Board Internet Student Portfolios Rubrics Language: Scaffolds for Learning: Formative Assessments: Texts: • Explicit teaching of vocabulary with Marzano’s Six Steps • Explicit instruction of the following conventions: • Word order • Verb tense • Subject-verb agreement • Usage • Make sense of unfamiliar conventions in order to make meaning from text • Build background knowledge • Word pronunciation websites • Online dictionaries • Word wall • • • Prentice Hall Literature World Masterpieces: See Appendix D for selected readings (Revised 2016) Extensions: • Use the vocabulary words in context • Mentor other students with their language difficulties • • • Oral reading Teacher observation Oral presentations Daily assignments Student Reflection Student Portfolios Performance Tasks: Please see Appendix A Socratic Seminar: Please see Appendix B Summative Assessment: “Cyrano deBergerac”-Edmond Rostand (play) online Great Expectations-Charles Dickens (novel) Grapes of Wrath-John Steinbeck (novel) Websites: Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Please see Appendix C/ www.scribd.com NJDOE Unit 4 Assessment www.pinkmonkey.com • Student Portfolios www.njdoe.gov www.dictionary.com www.readwritethink.org Ancillary Materials: Laptops Eno Board/Smart Board/Star Board Internet Student Portfolios Rubrics Speaking and Listening: • • • Socratic seminar Group work Think-pair-share (Revised 2016) Scaffolds for Learning: Formative Assessments: Texts: • • • • • Prentice Hall Literature World Masterpieces: See Appendix D for selected readings Written procedures Word walls Explicit instruction of Rubric for speaking Teacher observation of student listening Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 • • Modeling repetition • • vocabulary Explicit teaching of characteristics of good speakers and listeners Group work Extensions: • • • Mentoring another student Prepare a lesson to deliver to the class Memorize a passage to deliver to the class. • • • Rubric for Socratic seminar Observation of participation in cooperative learning groups Conducting interviews Performance Tasks: Please see Appendix A Socratic Seminar: Please see Appendix B Summative Assessment: Please see Appendix C/ “Cyrano deBergerac”-Edmond Rostand (play) online Great Expectations-Charles Dickens (novel) Grapes of Wrath-John Steinbeck (novel) Websites: www.scribd.com www.pinkmonkey.com www.njdoe.gov NJDOE Unit 4 Assessment • Student Portfolios www.dictionary.com www.readwritethink.org Ancillary Materials: Laptops Eno Board/Smart Board/Star Board Internet (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Student Portfolios Rubrics Vocabulary Words/Literary Terms admonish, brusque, fathom, fulminations, harbinger, plaintively, ravenous, supine, vaulted, vermin, modernism, superfluous, execrate, recalcitrant, alienate, isolation, pomp, balmy, disheveled, ravishing, virile, devoid, receptacle, lament, ostentatious, vain, demure, eviscerate, disposition, HSPA/SAT Prep vocabulary (Revised 2016) surmount, asunder, lewd, rent, madrigal, insinuate, convex, fetter, rhyme, rhythm, metaphor, alliteration, assonance, onomatopoeia, imagery, personification, simile, refrain, parallelism, couplet, sonnet, tone, mood, speaker, diction, irony, jargon, theme, allusion, connotation, monologue Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Appendix A “Poetry and Art” Performance Task /s 1. Rilke wrote “Archaic Torso of Apollo” in response to a sculpture. Following his example, write and present a poem in response to a work of art. Consider these suggestions: • Skim through art book or electronic art resources to find a work you like. • Note details about the work and the thoughts and feelings that it inspires in you. • Write a poem that will inspire similar thoughts and feelings in others. Present both the poem and the art to the class. 2. “Transformation” How is Gregor Samsa’s transformation in The Metamorphosis a metaphor for the existential experience? Write an essay that uses specific textual evidence to support an original concise thesis statement. (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Grading: (Refer to PARCC Rubrics found under Common Rubrics) Appendix B Socratic Seminar “Cyrano de Bergerac” Questions: 1. Compare/contrast Cyrano and Christian. Do they have any similarities besides their love for Roxanne? Why is Cyrano so sad when Christian dies, apart from his realization that he himself will never be able to tell Roxanne he loves her? Is there any other reason? 2. What would Cyrano’s life be like if he did not have such an outstanding nose? Would he have the same personality, feelings, or outlook on the world? Discuss. Grading: (Refer to Socratic Seminar Rubric found under Common Rubrics) (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Appendix C: Summative Assessment Unit 4 Title: Argument Research Paper and Career Exploration Subject: English Grade Level: 10 _____________________________________________________________________________________ Instructional Focus: (Indicate standards) Reading: RI.9-10.3 Analyze how the author unfolds an analysis or series of ideas or events, including the order in which the points are made, how they are introduced and developed, and the connections that are drawn between them. (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Writing: W.9-10.1. Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence. a. Introduce precise claim(s), distinguish the claim(s) from alternate or opposing claims, and create an organization that establishes clear relationships among claim(s), counterclaims, reasons, and evidence. Listening: SL.9-10.3. Evaluate a speaker’s point of view, reasoning, and use of evidence and rhetoric, identifying any false reasoning or distorted evidence. Speaking: SL.9-10.6. Adapt speech to a variety of contexts and tasks, demonstrating command of formal English. 21st Century Life and Careers Standards: CRP 1 - Act as a responsible and contributing citizen and employee. CRP 2 - Apply appropriate academic and technical skills. CRP 4- Communicate clearly and effectively and with reason. CRP 6 - Demonstrate creativity and innovation. CRP 8 - Utilize critical thinking to make sense of problems and persevere in solving them. CRP 11 - Use technology to enhance productivity. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Student Learning: Students will be able to complete the following: (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 • • • • Conduct sustained research on a controversial topic Develop a logical argument for a chosen position Investigate various career options Form a thesis statement ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Essential Question: How do researchers develop a thesis, find quality source material and organize their ideas and information? Introduction: Writing a research paper is an essential aspect of academics. When writing an argument paper, students are asked to make a claim, provide support and address counterarguments. Task: Students will select a research topic related to a career they might be interested in pursuing. For example, if your research paper is related to illegal immigration you may consider a career as a border patrol agent. It may be easier to choose a career first, then the research topic. Steps/Process: Research Paper: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. Choose your topic from the list provided. Develop a thesis statement. Gather resources Read, analyze and record (take notes) Create an outline Write a first draft (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 7. Gather additional information if needed 8. Revise your draft 9. Cite your sources 10. Proofread, edit and revise Career Exploration: 1. Based upon the research topic you have chosen, select a job you would be interested in pursuing as a career. 2. Conduct research on your chosen occupation using multiple sources (internet, paper, job boards, etc.) 3. Write an essay documenting the job description, skills needed, education needed, salary range, how ‘in demand’ that profession is in the U.S. and why you chose this career. Materials: Computers/laptops Websites: http://uwc.ucf.edu/files/handouts/Research_Paper_and_Argument_Topics.pdf http://www.su.edu/writingaresearchpaper.pdf http://corporate.britannica.com/library/home/BSW_Research_Paper.pdf Rubrics: Grading: (Refer to PARCC Rubric’s found under Common Rubrics) (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Research Paper Checklist ______Select a Topic: Pick a subject that interests you and that you can research with resources available to you. Avoid topics that are too broad or too narrow. You will have to complete a fair amount of reading on this subject in order to write your paper—choose something that you can enjoy. ______Survey the Topic & State a Preliminary Thesis: Get an overview of your topic by reading background articles in general works such as encyclopedias or in popular press journals such as Time, Newsweek, Rolling Stone, etc. The Internet is also an excellent starting point for preliminary research. This preliminary research will help you identify significant aspects of your topic and will serve as an introduction to later research. It will also help you narrow the topic and formulate a thesis or central theme. (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 ______Prepare a Preliminary Bibliography: Begin compiling a list of possible sources for your research. You may want to consult with the research librarian regarding possible sources for your paper. It is important to determine whether the sources are reliable and up-to-date. Generally, any source more than five years old may be outdated and can usually be replaced with more current information. Approach all possible sources with a critical attitude. In particular, be alert to the source of information from web sites. (see other handouts for Annotated Bibliographies & Evaluating Web Sources) ______Prepare a Working Outline: Using information you have gathered during your preliminary reading, divide your paper into subheadings under your thesis. This outline will help you organize your paper later. (This may also be a good time to discuss your “paper” with peer tutors at the Writing Center) (See separate handout for guidelines on creating outlines) ______Conduct Research & Take Notes: You may want to use 4” X 6” index cards to organize your research. Each card should have a main heading summarizing an idea and should include only one idea, fact or quote from a particular source. Make sure you include all the necessary bibliographic information for each source. Consult a writing handbook (such as The Little, Brown Compact Handbook) for the proper format for your subject area (MLA or APA). ______Write a First Draft: Organize your note cards by their headings and arrange them in a logical manner. Start your paper with an introduction that states your thesis. The body of your paper should develop and add details to support your thesis. The conclusion will summarize your research and restate the thesis. ______Attribute Quotes and Other Information: Avoid plagiarism (presenting another person’s words or ideas as if they were your own). You must document all direct quotes, paraphrases of other people’s ideas or speech, and any other information that you get from an outside source. If the assignment does not specify a documentation style, ask your teacher which one he/she prefers. ______Revise, Edit & Rewrite the First Draft: Read your paper out loud. Each paragraph should be coherent, precise and free of grammatical errors. Check the accuracy of your facts and quotes against your sources. Select an interesting title based on your paper’s thesis. Make sure your paper is formatted correctly (double spaced, one-inch margins) and proofread it for typos and other mistakes. ______Hand In Your Completed Paper (ON TIME) and Celebrate. Senior Research Project Evaluation Rubric CRITERIA (Revised 2016) Exceeds the standard 4 Meets the standard 3 Almost meets the standard 2 Does not meet the standard 1 Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Ideas and Development Score (__ x 2) = ___ Organization Score (__ x 2) = ___ The paper is clear and focused. It develops an arguable thesis statement that is substantiated with compelling evidence. The thesis statement is clearly defined and makes a complex claim that responds to the assignment. The paper builds a cohesive and complex argument. The paper builds a cohesive argument. The writer draws sufficient relevant information from a variety of challenging sources to expand and support the ideas. The writer continuously anticipates and responds to reader’s informational needs, and may raise new, important questions. Support is grounded in solid, relevant research. Supporting details are accurate, relevant, and helpful. The writer responds to reader’s informational needs. The paper has a strong internal structure that serves to prove the thesis statement and leads the reader to relevant important conclusions. The introduction creatively raises the subject, engages the reader and leads smoothly to the thesis. The paper’s structure serves to prove the thesis statement and leads the reader to the paper’s points and conclusions. The introduction raises the subject clearly, engages the reader, and leads smoothly to the thesis. The order and placement of details promote the reader’s understanding and interest. Purposeful transitions help the reader see how each point connects to a large concept. The conclusion effectively (Revised 2016) The paper is clear. It develops a thesis statement that is arguable, and supported with credible evidence. The thesis is clear, makes an arguable claim that responds to the assignment. The order and placement of details promote the reader’s understanding. Transitions help the reader see how each point connects to a larger concept. The conclusion clearly wraps up the argument. The paper is partially clear. It develops a thesis statement that is only somewhat arguable and/or is supported with insufficient evidence. The thesis makes a claim that may be somewhat factual and/or may not respond to the assignment. The paper attempts to build an argument. Some support seems grounded in solid research. Some seems based more on common knowledge or on thin or underused sources. The writer sometimes responds to reader’s informational needs. Yet, some important questions are left hanging. The paper has structure but it may sometimes cause confusion and/or force the reader to “construct” the argument to prove its thesis statement. The introduction raises the subject but may fail to engage the reader and/or lead smoothly to the thesis. The order of information is sometimes helpful, but occasionally confusing; information may be repeated. Transitions are attempted, but do not always show a reader how ideas connect. The paper does not yet have a thesis statement that is understandable and/or arguable. One or more of these problems may be evident: The thesis is a fact and/or the paper has no relevance to the assignment. The paper wanders or dissolves into a list of disjointed ideas with no clear main point. Most support is vague, questionable, or missing. The reader is left with numerous unanswered questions. The paper’s lack of structure leaves the reader confused. One or more of the following problems may be evident: The introduction fails to raise the subject clearly, engage the reader, and lead smoothly to the thesis. Ideas seem randomly ordered; the reader often wonders where the writer is headed. It is very hard to see how ideas link to each other - or to any main point. There is no real conclusion, the paper just stops. Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Sentence Fluency Score (__ x 2) = ___ resolves questions and reinforces important assertions or offers logical extensions for inquiry. The reader’s understanding of the topic grows throughout the paper. The reader can follow what is written. The writer uses sentences that are strong, clear, and thoughtfully structured. • Meaningful sentence beginnings lend variety and clarity to the text. The writer uses sentences that are clear and grammatical. • Meaningful sentence beginnings give the text clarity. • • • (Revised 2016) Sentences connect in a coherent and sophisticated manner. All sentences are grammatically sound, complete, and vary in structure. The text can be read quickly and without difficulty. The conclusion may be redundant, predictable, or too abrupt. The reader struggles to see some pattern or logical structure. Despite some questions, the reader can usually follow what is written. The writer uses sentences that are reasonably clear and (for the most part) grammatical. • Some meaningful sentence beginnings give the text moderate clarity. • Additional transitions between sentences would be helpful. • Sentences connect coherently to each other. • Sentences are grammatical and complete. • The text can be read with minimal difficulty. • • Most sentences are grammatical and complete. Some sentences may be hard to follow. The reader has occasional difficulty following the text. The writer uses sentences that are unclear, ungrammatical, or both. The reader is likely to notice one or more of these problems: • Few meaningful sentence beginnings result in a lack of clarity in the text. • The writer rarely uses linking phrases; the reader must work at connecting ideas. • Grammatical errors are distracting. Words or whole phrases may be missing. • The text is difficult to read. Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Word Choice and Terminology Score = ____ The writer uses well-chosen words to convey his/her argument in a clear, precise, highly readable way. • The writer consistently chooses precise, vivid words and phrases. • • • Conventions Score = ____ The writer uses words that are accurate and make the argument clear. • Language in the paper is correct and functional. • The vocabulary suits the subject. The vocabulary suits the subject and audience. • Technical or special terms are clarified or defined as needed. Technical or special terms are used with sufficient explanation. • The language promotes reader understanding. The language makes the argument clear and memorable for the reader The writer demonstrates a strong grasp of the conventions of standard written English (e.g., spelling, usage, capitalization, punctuation, and paragraphing); the paper is basically error free. The writer demonstrates a good understanding of the conventions of standard written English (e.g. spelling, usage, capitalization, punctuation, and paragraphing); any errors, although noticeable, do not impair the paper’s readability. Appendix 4 Texts: (Revised 2016) Most words that the writer uses are reasonably accurate and make the argument clear on a general level. Most language in the paper • is correct and functional. However, the vocabulary is sometimes a bit too general, technical, or informal for the topic, audience, or both. • The writer does not seem completely at home with the language and terminology of the content area. • Technical or special terms may sometimes be used without sufficient explanation; the reader occasionally feels on the outside looking in. • The language alternately puzzles and enlightens the reader. The writer uses words that are inappropriate for topic and purpose or simply does not speak to the audience. One or more of these problems may be evident: • Vocabulary is often incorrectly used. The writer demonstrates a basic understanding of the conventions of standard written English (e.g. spelling, usage, capitalization, punctuation, and paragraphing); errors sometimes impair the paper’s readability. The writer demonstrates a limited understanding of the conventions of standard written English (e.g., spelling, usage, capitalization, punctuation, and paragraphing); many errors impair the paper’s readability. • A limited vocabulary does not allow the writer to explore the subject in depth. • Technical language or jargon may be overused—OR technical language is missing where it would be helpful. • The language frequently confuses the reader. Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 Title Type of Text The Metamorphosis-Franz Kafka Short Story The Bracelet-Colette Short Story The Glass of Milk-Manuel Rojas Short Story Cyrano de Bergerac-Edmond Rostand Play Great Expectations-Charles Dickens Novel Grapes of Wrath-John Steinbeck Novel Fear-Gabriela Mistral Poetry The Prayer-Gabriela Mistral Poetry Time-Gabriela Mistral Poetry Green-Juan Ramon Jimenez Poetry Lightness-Juan Ramon Jiminez Poetry Everything is Plundered-A. Akhmatova Poetry I am Not One of Those Who Left the Land-A. Akhmatova Poetry The Weeping Orchard- Boris Pasternak Poetry (Revised 2016) Roselle Public Schools Abraham Clark High School English Curriculum Units of Study Grades 9-12 The Drowsy Garden-Boris Pasternak Poetry The Grownup-Rainer Maria Rilke Poetry Interior of the Rose- Rainer Maria Rilke Poetry Archaic Torso of Apollo-Rainer Maria Rilke Poetry Palm-Paul Valery Poetry The Friendly Wood-Paul Valery Poetry Caesar-Paul Valery Poetry (Revised 2016)
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